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Astride
She sat astride my naked thighs,
My manhood in her hand,
Perturbed by its flaccid size;
But soon she made it stand
Forward with her ample hips
She aimed her cunt towards this pole
Impaling it twixt its lips
My full length in her hole
We then began our usual quest,
Suffering no tribulation
Reaching orgasms at their best
Through G-spot stimulation.
Continuing for near an hour
Orgasms there were plenty
We pause to regain our power
Then proceed up to twenty
My manhood in her hand,
Perturbed by its flaccid size;
But soon she made it stand
Forward with her ample hips
She aimed her cunt towards this pole
Impaling it twixt its lips
My full length in her hole
We then began our usual quest,
Suffering no tribulation
Reaching orgasms at their best
Through G-spot stimulation.
Continuing for near an hour
Orgasms there were plenty
We pause to regain our power
Then proceed up to twenty
Published 21st Dec 2012
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That beats the legendary "five times a night" said (by a model girl lover) to have been achieved by 1980s businessman Ralph Halpern.
24th Dec 2012 7:04pm
I like the internal rhyme of the first and second stanzas. Of course, the imagery is great too! I can't wait to read more.
-GoodGirl
-GoodGirl
24th Dec 2012 11:22pm
Glad you like this. I usually try to get a rhythm in my poems as well as imagery.Not always easy in the pursuit of some of my themes. I like many of your poems too.
11th Feb 2013 8:56am
hi garden lover.... i really enjoyed this and particularly liked how it felt like the reader entered amidst the throws.....and the choice of twixt added an air of lightness to this piece...tyvm synth
11th Feb 2013 9:26am
Thanks for your appreciative remarks. I like the reader to feel part of the action described.
