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the dead air of things

"grace on fire"
the heavens called it..

there was a war inside me..
lightening. chasing
chaos
bondage
........oh the cliques of toasting to death...

barely breathing & naked sitting in lament before the silence
I forgot myself in where my sin began
under summered skin
& I've grown tired of the light..

I'll see you in my dreams

Written by Kandice Bush (KandiceBush)

Published 15th July 2010 9:07am Last modified 15th July 2010 9:15am Read all poems by Kandice Bush
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Written on 15th July 2010 9:17am by opheliac

as dark as it may sound it all seems to fade away with the last line
"i'll see you in my dreams"

Haunting words exposing your soul

Written on 15th July 2010 1:17pm by Abracadabra

...in public, Kandice. Hope you can come up for air and find that second wind - isn't it time to admit you deserve it, before the summer slips away (again).

Deep within your heart...

Written on 19th July 2010 2:01pm by anandosen

From a poet's point of view, the perfect punch...however, I am nobody to lament or wish you to come out of your odds, if any. However, your work represents quality literature.

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