Done

liking it a lot Gigi. totally different style for you but you've done it great.

Love is a very loaded word  

Like a gun  

One shot to the heart

and you're  

done.

I broke the second line up a bit just to see what it would look like. what do you  think yourself?

anyhow, nice one Gigi. shine on !

 

Yes sounds better thanks green :-)

Interesting, but I'm not sure I agree with you this time, Eamon. Separating the last line gives the "done" more emphasis, but I think breaking up the line breaks the rhythm too much.
Just my humble opinion. :)

Small, but powerfully effective.
Really really good!
Four lines and I can't stop reading them over and over. :)

Thank you doll. I'm glad you like it :-)

Gg you have a gift beautiful lady..write on!!! peace Crim

Thank you sweet crim.. Xoxox

lets  just  say   i  am  your  man   do  you  know  how  much  i  would  offer  a  sweet  chic  like  you?i  think  love  is   directly  proportional  to  happiness   so   one  needs  to  have  it..GIgi  you  steal  my  sweet  feelings...

Awe so cute jaito!! Xoxox thank you

An analogy I never considered. Nice

Thanks.

Niiiiice...

Thank you

smack! just like that! ;0 fun read!

Thank you boo :)

True words! Love can be hell. Enjoyed

Thanks. And it can be :-)

I have felt this way!! Love it, short,yet powerful.

Thank you :-)

That's keeping it 100!!!
Nice lil piece!!

Sir Lancelott