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Bitch II

You think with your dick
like you're in a competition
to be a dirty old man
I'm fed up with being fucked
the same way you swig a beer

I faked all those orgasms
every damn one
sat through boring football games
wiped your dirty mess
from my favourite dress
when you wanted a quickie
in the car

I gave you my best years

I put up with your insane mother
and when she dies
I'm gonna dance on her grave
and sing
You're a taker who never gives
you've turned me into a machine
that cooks and cleans and cooks and cleans
I'm a slave to your whole filthy
brood

Normal people have holidays every year
but not us
It's so long since we took one
no wonder I screwed the mailman last week
and your brother
who else would put up with a
boring jerk like you

You can buy a new bed
and throw out the couch
because from now on
you're sleeping downstairs
it's permanent
If you were a woman
you'd be the world's worst
Bitch

Written by Abracadabra

Published 22nd February 2010 11:33pm Last modified 23rd February 2010 10:11am Read all poems by Abracadabra
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4 comments
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Marvellous to see the scenario from the woman's

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Poet

Written on 23rd February 2010 10:03am by Jack Heslop

viewpoint, and you convey the character really really well.

re: Marvellous to see the scenario from the woman's

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Poet

Written on 23rd February 2010 10:11am by Abracadabra

I had it in my mind to balance Bitch I at some stage - but our tete a tete pushed me off the cliff and this was the result. The perils of being a commentator on love gone wrong! Thanks for the nudge and your kind feedback, Jack.

re: revenge...

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Poet

Written on 23rd February 2010 8:43pm by Abracadabra

Yes, "I gave you my best years" can come up quite often - and a man would never say that to a woman would they. I think I better write something lighthearted after all my recent bitchery. I have found it quite a heavy vibe to absorb. Thanks for the kind feedback, Steven.

re: re: re: revenge...

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Poet

Written on 23rd February 2010 10:17pm by Abracadabra

Surely not - I can't imagine you've led such a sheltered life!!

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