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A little bit of what you know

Tempers flaired
Fists screamed through air,
Skin under nails,
Scalp missing hair,
Words dripped spit,
Hate joined then split,
Neither blinked
As you said “fuck this shit”

Written by Mo57

Published on Feb 6 2010 at 22:00 CST. Read all poems by Mo57
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O.o

Written on 02/06/10 at 22:47:53 CST by invisable ink x

Ohhhhh i really dig this one alot, It sticks to my teeth, and i can't stop reading it.

Great work
(:

Written on 02/07/10 at 10:16:34 CST by priya dileep

this one i love, its just as if your mind has spat these words out , in its fine rhythm!

extremely entertaining!

Written on 02/07/10 at 11:08:46 CST by Stephanie W.

Exciting and a bit humorous as well with your last line! Perfect combination!

cheers!!

Written on 02/12/10 at 15:48:25 CST by Mo57

Glad it was enjoyed...the fell as Priya said was to spit it out...me likey words that get written b4 the brain can edit..

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