Written on 02/05/10 at 08:02:28 CST by priya dileep

words with dep feeling, i love the urgency of tone in this one, well you make a tempting point here:-)

Written on 02/05/10 at 08:53:03 CST by Iulian Caloianu

glad you like it. musicality and rhyme is what gives a poem perfection, otherwise it'll all be simple prose. those who choose not to use rhyme, must have a certain, native brilliance if they want their poetry to shine.

Written on 02/08/10 at 08:34:25 CST by tijean

Yes, I agree with the that. For me a poem isn't simply something that rhymes - but also isn't something that is 'uncollected' text.

I believe the key is 'rythym'. Your verse here are certainly ryhthmic..and all the better for it.

I enjoyed the verse - but was a little disturbed..

Is this how you feel, or are you exploring emotions?

S

Written on 02/08/10 at 18:24:17 CST by Iulian Caloianu

thank you for the comment.
I want my verse to be perfect, and to me that is being represented by symmetry, rhythm, rhyme, flow, meaning, an abstract form of sentence (nothing given, or revealed, but hidden in symbols and unconventional expressions). I never write about the things I see, that's too easy. I explore emotions, and only for that, my poem becomes "light", and allows me to "play" with words as much as I wish. poetry is not to be taken seriously. it's like candy. you taste it, and you enjoy it. simple as that.