Observational Poems : reality : Deep Underground Poetry Community

reality

we all get our hearts broken and we all die
these things are inevitable
Ive had my heart broken
and now I'm looking forward
to the somber hand of death
to grant me my leave here
(this place sickens and discourages me)

Written by nathan illig (noonenothingnone)

Published on Feb 5 2010 at 0:41 CST. Read all poems by nathan illig
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.

4 comments
(22 reads)

Only registered members may comment on poems.

Comment

Written on 02/05/10 at 01:06:13 CST by Jack Heslop

Not quite as artful as some of your work, but still darkly potent and finely wrought. The 'sombre hand of death' expression was beautiful.

re: Comment

Written on 02/05/10 at 01:12:05 CST by nathan illig

yeah not very artful.. more prosey.. if that's a word.. if the somber hand of death doesn't come find me soon I'm going to go looking for her..

comment number 2, not including yours (:

Written on 02/05/10 at 04:49:29 CST by invisable ink x

True that is isn't quite as artful as some of your other master pieces, but i can relate to this piece a lot, although i can relate to some of your other poems, this one stands out for me,

x hang in there,

re: comment number 2, not including yours (:

Written on 02/05/10 at 09:27:09 CST by nathan illig

using my own words against me lol you hang in there too hun

Recent Discussions

Keep Calm and Carry On (a motivational thread?) - Today at 2:45 CST by David C. (

1 2 )

Depression ( Together there is a way through it) - Mar 20 2010 at 23:22 CST by David C.

I hate it when.... game - Mar 20 2010 at 16:46 CST by black-roses (

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 )

I hereby... - Mar 20 2010 at 11:11 CST by David.S (

1 2 3 4 )

I love it when... game - Mar 20 2010 at 11:09 CST by David.S (

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 )

Challenge: Serial killer poem - Mar 20 2010 at 4:21 CST by David C. (

1 2 )

i wish i could.. game - Mar 20 2010 at 3:17 CST by David C. (

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 )

Socks & Pants From Primark: The Movie - Mar 19 2010 at 17:49 CST by Tim Roberts

Multi Media - Mar 19 2010 at 17:47 CST by Tim Roberts

New Feature: Add Images & YouTube Videos to Poems - Mar 19 2010 at 14:34 CST by invisable ink x

This website was adapted from WebAPP - Automated Perl Portal v6Feb2010 - Big thanks to BantyChick and the rest of the Dev Team.
All comments on this website are the responsibility of the Poster.