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enlightenment

Ash fluttering
to the sound of
guitars
fan whirring
cables
i am myself
by twisting out of myself

an empty plate
filled with contemporaries
one minute i'm there
one minute i'm not

a car alarm cuts through
the 3.43am silence
with a vicious slash
and the weak, flickering light
on the thirteenth floor of
a distant building call out to me like
warning like
reality

i exhale
smoke whispering to
the night
a flick of my finger
i feel like i am falling
ash fluttering
exploding to the ground

Written by Celine (3ampoems)

Published 1st February 2010 3:04am Read all poems by Celine
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really listless

Written on 1st February 2010 8:46am by Abracadabra

...spacy feel you've achieved here - almost as if you're about to jump off in a trance, Celine. Don't do it girl - keep writing about it.

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