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breathe

..sucking you in..
..to the back of my skull..
..where I exist..
..as if we knew what that meant..
..to soak up the pheromones..
..and spend all my endorphins..
..then left empty..
..and begging for another instant of you..

Written by nathan illig (noonenothingnone)

Published 29th January 2010 7:20pm Read all poems by nathan illig
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breathe

Written on 30th January 2010 00:18am by unboundpoetess

Your jagged edges make very interesting seams. Nice to meet you this way.
H

Comment

Written on 30th January 2010 00:46am by Jasmine Cormier

a good poem from the heart, I like how it's written and the meaning is true of most love.
To give your all and get nothing.

re: breathe

Written on 30th January 2010 2:31am by nathan illig

thank you very much.. a lot of my other poems are much more extreme and violent and harsh.. so be forewarned.. nice to meet you too btw

re: Comment

Written on 30th January 2010 2:35am by nathan illig

yes this was from the heart.. though I don't know if I wrote it to anyone in particular I'll have to look at the file I have.. I dont usually name the people theyre for in public.. at least not anymore.. but thanks glad you like it.. most of my other poems are from a place of anger.. i do have a heart though.. that has been crushed many a time from getting nothing in the end but spent endorphins and an aching chest..

: )

Written on 30th January 2010 5:15am by unboundpoetess

Thanks for the warning, new friend. I say bring it.
H

re: : )

Written on 30th January 2010 5:59am by nathan illig

re: beautiful..

Written on 30th January 2010 10:38pm by nathan illig

thanks so much. closeness...yes. a lot different from my darker stuff. way at the other end of the spectrum. glad you dig this one. cheers!!

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