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The Butterchav Effect
On the train
not thinking
about weed.
Four chavs get
on, talking
about weed.
Looking at their
reflection in
the window.
Reach for phone,
start talking
about weed.
30 minutes?
wicked.
On the train
thinking
about
weed.
not thinking
about weed.
Four chavs get
on, talking
about weed.
Looking at their
reflection in
the window.
Reach for phone,
start talking
about weed.
30 minutes?
wicked.
On the train
thinking
about
weed.
Published 19th Feb 2012
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19th Feb 2012 3:17pm
19th Feb 2012 10:23pm
That is probably one of the greatest truths I have heard while reading on this site.
I was off draw for 10 months until I got text from an old mate asking if I knew anyone that wanted it and then I realised it was me that wanted it the most.
I was off draw for 10 months until I got text from an old mate asking if I knew anyone that wanted it and then I realised it was me that wanted it the most.
20th Feb 2012 2:44am
Ohhh, I love this! The first and last stanzas are beautiful contrasts, and the entire message rings true. Nice!
20th Feb 2012 11:09am
