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Song

Dream a Melody so firm
that Earth and Sky begin to form.
Then Harmony to crack the Stone
and Rain to heal it's saddened soul.

Hum the Song to bring forth Roots
and Wind to some day cool it's leaves.
Hum louder and the Birds will learn
and Insects, less, and yet immortal.

Sing the Song and Man will Build,
will Dream,
will Kill,
will Worship, and Die.

Then be the Song and the Universe
will soon know who you are.
Music as your eternal Soul
shall guide new Worlds to discover their own.

Written by Brian Minnick (manic_inspiration)

Published on Jan 20 2010 at 15:42 CST. Read all poems by Brian Minnick
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Written on 01/20/10 at 15:45:25 CST by Jack Heslop

Everything flows perfectly and the language is, as ever, beautiful. You're a true poet. Each piece is like a sculpture chiselled from finest marble.

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Written on 01/20/10 at 15:48:16 CST by Brian Minnick

You truly humble me. Thank you sincerely.

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Written on 01/21/10 at 00:39:08 CST by Kymberly

This poem is beautiful. It reminds me of a letter written by Chief Seattle I once read.. http://www.barefootsworld.net/seattle.html (if you're interested)
There's something almost sentient about your words.

inspiring

Written on 01/21/10 at 19:21:33 CST by Melancholia

Its very inspiring, I could think of a thousand meanings behind this. Great work.

great work Brian

Written on 02/02/10 at 04:43:38 CST by tijean

..added to my reading list!

Steven

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