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Song

Dream a Melody so firm
that Earth and Sky begin to form.
Then Harmony to crack the Stone
and Rain to heal it's saddened soul.

Hum the Song to bring forth Roots
and Wind to some day cool it's leaves.
Hum louder and the Birds will learn
and Insects, less, and yet immortal.

Sing the Song and Man will Build,
will Dream,
will Kill,
will Worship, and Die.

Then be the Song and the Universe
will soon know who you are.
Music as your eternal Soul
shall guide new Worlds to discover their own.

Written by Brian Minnick (manic_inspiration)

Published 20th January 2010 9:42pm Read all poems by Brian Minnick
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Written on 20th January 2010 9:45pm by Jack Heslop

Everything flows perfectly and the language is, as ever, beautiful. You're a true poet. Each piece is like a sculpture chiselled from finest marble.

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Written on 20th January 2010 9:48pm by Brian Minnick

You truly humble me. Thank you sincerely.

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Written on 21st January 2010 6:39am by Kymberly

This poem is beautiful. It reminds me of a letter written by Chief Seattle I once read.. http://www.barefootsworld.net/seattle.html (if you're interested)
There's something almost sentient about your words.

inspiring

Written on 22nd January 2010 1:21am by Melancholia

Its very inspiring, I could think of a thousand meanings behind this. Great work.

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