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Raw Sugar

The sun streaks on dirty windshields

Caught up in you
A saffron tinted haze

Foggy reflections of painted paths
set in crumbling stones

Who knew empathy was a physical pain..

( Inside, he shakes me )

Written by Kandice Bush (KandiceBush)

Published 12th January 2010 5:55am Read all poems by Kandice Bush
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you always

Written on 12th January 2010 8:08am by Abracadabra

...manage to capture something special in a few short lines, Kandice - and Raw Sugar is true to form.

I agree

Written on 14th January 2010 1:34am by Louis Lee Warner

It's a magic little poem that has such power in so little words. It really speaks to me. x

beauty

Written on 25th July 2010 3:56pm by Ashley D

this is beautiful. that is all.

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