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Wasted Thoughts

Standing , facing
placing then tracing
upon the tiled floor
my thoughts depleted
my currency poor
I think of the chances that I did not get
life could've been so golden
with diamonds inset .
Behind is the alcohol enebriated bay
there are people with thoughts
their mouths disallow them to say .
They are catapulted into the void
around the constellation
unspoken thoughts they embroid
awaiting reincarnation
for to be re employed
only maybe for a day
these people dont know
that they've blown themselves away
I re enter the clustered bay .
I see dirty walls
failed ideas
and nicotine stained pool balls
a cancer harbouring machine
glasses smeared with nectar
and flourescent lights they beam .
The dart board of adorned cork
hangs over all the intoxicated feet
that stumble as they walk
amid the heavy fleet .
At least the thoughts I blow into space
are down on paper
I hope there will always be a trace
I hope they will always be remembered .

Written by Paul Summerscales (diddi)

Published 6th January 2010 12:29pm Read all poems by Paul Summerscales
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Bar?

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Poet

Written on 6th January 2010 3:11pm by Blackwolf

wow that poem reminds me of a bar. very indepth and amazing wow.

re: Bar?

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Poet

Written on 6th January 2010 3:18pm by Paul Summerscales

Yeah thats right it sure is a bar one I used to frequent a lot back in my crazy days hahaha I miss those times although I'm still crazy but alas past it now hahathanks for your comment :) take care

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