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Images Of Saturn

Sitting at ten pence shaped tables
bodies in infra red
all around me
I peer through fenetres
paved in glass
out into the blustery skies
I watch a rainbow smoulder
through the summer air
prismatic is the holder
of the golden sunshine yesteryear
solar picks a colour
of her auburn cola hair
Images of saturn
arise to my eyes
god how I wish
I was back there .

Written by Paul Summerscales (diddi)

Published 23rd December 2009 8:42pm Read all poems by Paul Summerscales
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Written on 24th December 2009 6:18am by Jack Heslop

A rich and heavenly mix of self-reflection and high rhetoric. Lovely short poem. Especially love the phrase "cola hair".

re: Comment

Written on 24th December 2009 6:39am by Paul Summerscales

Thanks Jack , Iam really pleased you liked my poem and your summary of it was (like your writings) impeccable .Again thanks and good luck in the onset of a new poetic annual beginning ..... Paul

Love <3

Written on 26th December 2009 1:25am by SJ

WOW!! Your imagery is superb. So simplistic and vividly impactful. Favorite image: a rainbow smoulder. Absolutely loved it.

re: Love <3

Written on 28th December 2009 3:32am by Paul Summerscales

Thanks I am pleased you like it ...Paul

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