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Whose Lies......
whose lies do I believe
does luv blind my mind
for one that no one believes
am I to change
what is deep within me
that perhaps is the truth
judging on words
said in distress or depression
acts that weren't meant vicious
names called out in vein
no regard to family ties or luv
sacrifice all right or wrong
as a Mom ~ I hardly believe in that
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
does luv blind my mind
for one that no one believes
am I to change
what is deep within me
that perhaps is the truth
judging on words
said in distress or depression
acts that weren't meant vicious
names called out in vein
no regard to family ties or luv
sacrifice all right or wrong
as a Mom ~ I hardly believe in that
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 3rd Oct 2016
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3rd Oct 2016 1:07pm
All one can truly count on is time . . . Blessed time to sort things out.
4th Oct 2016 00:45am
Hey SG......you're right.....time will give answers I need......mean while I stand firm beside my Son.......thank you for taking with me thru my days of confusion......appreciate you very much my Friend.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
3rd Oct 2016 6:47pm
It is unfortunate that words said in despair and anger can have far reaching effects. Most religions hold that the greatest source of evil is from the mouth. Learning to rule ones tongue is important. I enjoyed your poem. This is a deep ponder. Thank you for sharing it with us.
4th Oct 2016 00:50am
Hi DC.......this write wasn't easy emotionally but the ink rolled from my soul.......I luv your feedback......words carelessly written or said can cause great damage.......souls judge upon words without knowing the soul behind words or actions.......thank you helping me think......purple luv & hugs xo :)
3rd Oct 2016 7:18pm
I wasn't certain where this was going until the last night, nice twist.
It's amazing the damage words can do that even forgiveness cannot
overlook. Accept, but not forget.
It's amazing the damage words can do that even forgiveness cannot
overlook. Accept, but not forget.
4th Oct 2016 00:58am
HI Ahavati........exactly right.....I will not forget this damage that words and thoughts not clearly thought out has emotionally rung me out this week.......I think at times we need to look at ourselves a bit closer before we toss others around.....also beware when Mom gets mad......LOL!! Thank you for sharing your insight here......purple luv & hugs xo :)
4th Oct 2016 10:09pm
The most emotionally painful lies are probably those spoken within the family. That's where the bonds of trust are intended to be strongest, and when they're broken so lies the heart, bleeding where it should be sheltered. I suspect you're a fine mom with honesty and first rate writing as your policy. Just hate to see you in a dark mood Flower!
7th Oct 2016 1:58am
Thank you Crow for such understanding words.......I've hurt so much within the last few weeks......I just pray I've made the right choices and luv has not made me blind but wise to make correct assessments.......appreciate your insightful words my friend......purple luv & hugs xo :)
