Avalanche

This is such a breathtaking sensual write 💓
So visual. The touches, sounds and movements can be felt deeply.
Very steamy ink 💓

Thank you so much, lovely Heart!  
 
You always make me smile with your visits :-)  
Glad to hear you could feel this one deeply and found it to be steamy!

Ooh, `vulvanic`. . .another thing or word we have in common;). . .but hey, Beautiful, this piece is steaming and stunning; leaves much to ponder on. . .~xo, Devlin.

Thank you so much, Lady Devlin!

Seriously? You used that word? Here I was thinking I came up with something unique, but hey... if I could name someone who had the same idea it would be you ;-)

Nailed her? That is quite the compliment, thank you so much!  
 
Ehm... no pruning with this one? Are you oké? ;-)  
 
And yes... that is one hell of a song...

Very sexy and seductive poem I like it

Thank you for your visit and leaving a wonderful comment :-)

This is a sexy little beast of a poem! The pacing and phrasing builds a sense of anticipation that pays off nicely. Vulvanic—now that's a fun word.

That song, that song, that song... oh my melolagnia! Yeah, it just made my playlist. ;-)

Ahhh... sexy little beast of a poem! You made me smile big time :-D  
   
Glad to hear the song made your playlist and yeah... that damn melolagnia ;-)  
   
Thank you so much, your comments are treasured!  
P.S. I knew you would mention vulvanic ;-)

Your words are seductively elegant,Duende
You always manage to make it sensual and beautiful....

You left me a bit speechless... seductively elegant?  
That's a huge compliment... thank you so much, Kasai!

Wonderfully described. Almost like I was there 😋

Awesome read 😁

You wish ;-)

Thanks for your wonderful comment
Always nice to see you on my page...

I love illustrated erotica.
'sighs with sapphire eyes': nice...

Thank you so much, I really appreciate your visits!  
 
I had doubts about 'sighs' but based on your comment I decided it should stay :-)

beautiful Duende this write is pure sizzling, hot erotica!!!

love Crim

Thank you, lovely Crim!  
 
Sizzling hot erotica, that's an amazing compliment!  
 
Love, Duende

"my mind gets
lost in longings
 
sliding around in
circling seduction
I sustain her on
the edge of
eruption
 
sighs

with
sapphire
eyes flaming
nostrils flaring
her breathing
shifts from  
volatile
to violent "

Duende..
this...is...ultra-sensual...
there's so much anticipation
reeking through this vibe..
avalanche indeed!!

Thank you so much, Naajir!

Ultra-sensual... that's a huge compliment!
I really appreciate your visits :-)

This is one incredibly Sultry piece!  Wow!  I am in awe!
Willow

Thank you so much!

I really appreciate your comment!
Had to look up Sultry (my vocabulary increases by the day) but... Wow!!!

Awesome! I'm happy to have shared a word with you!  ;)

Hullo

very easy to read, your lines stayed focused, nice subtle ryhme made it more the pleasure

very refreshing angle

Thank you so much!

I feel honored to get a compliment from someone with so many trophies!
Great to hear that you thought my lines stayed focus, that's a challenge for me ;-)

Good erotic writing should leave the reader in a euphoric state of arousal.  It's imagery should create a transference into the action of words and images......stimulating.


Your words do deeply stimulate....male, female or other.  I mean that in the most complimentary way 👏

Thank you so much!

I agree with you that erotica should be stimlating.... allowing the reader to feel and see it!
That you find my words to be deeply stimulating is an amazing compliment :-)

I truly appreciate your comment!

From now on, if I want to read anything erotic, I know who to cum to. Your writing is admirable.

Wow... that's an amazing compliment!

I can't ask for better, thank you so much :-)