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As One
walk with me my soulmate
where pretty flowers grow
and sacred vows are made
listen to a harmonious song
from crystal waters flow
with hearts beating in rhythm
watching an orange sun paint
beautiful streaks upon a blue sky
where clouds and heaven meet
looking into your shining eyes
seeing deeply within your soul
just how sacredly you luv me
our smiles embrace so sweetly
as hearts tap against each other
beating every emotion we create
we become stronger spirits together
walking side by side thru each day
sharing life, luv & light as one
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
where pretty flowers grow
and sacred vows are made
listen to a harmonious song
from crystal waters flow
with hearts beating in rhythm
watching an orange sun paint
beautiful streaks upon a blue sky
where clouds and heaven meet
looking into your shining eyes
seeing deeply within your soul
just how sacredly you luv me
our smiles embrace so sweetly
as hearts tap against each other
beating every emotion we create
we become stronger spirits together
walking side by side thru each day
sharing life, luv & light as one
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 27th Jul 2016
| Edited 31st Jul 2016
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27th Jul 2016 11:04am
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Awe Sweet Lily......thank you for your awesome support.....I'm glad for him and you.....luv ya xo :)
A wonderful poem, flower, and from the heart it does come.
Love this.Love this.Love this . . .
"looking into your shinning eyes
seeing deeply within your soul
just how sacredly you luv me "
Love this.Love this.Love this . . .
"looking into your shinning eyes
seeing deeply within your soul
just how sacredly you luv me "
28th Jul 2016 2:47am
Thank you SG......I'm so happy you luv this......it was an awesome experience to write......always luv your smile upon my ink.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
27th Jul 2016 3:12pm
Your purple pen has laid some more heartfelt ink on these pages.
your inspiration is strong and vibrant!
your inspiration is strong and vibrant!
28th Jul 2016 2:54am
Hey SlowG......thrilled to see your smile back on my page.......my inspiration is sacred to me......purple luv & hugs xo :)
27th Jul 2016 8:57pm
28th Jul 2016 2:55am
Hi DL......glad you enjoyed my words of luv......thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
28th Jul 2016 2:13am
such a beautiful poem - I sometimes get jealous of your ability to write this genre as I find it the most difficult - it gave me that warm fuzzy feeling inside if only for a few valuable moments :-)
thank you for being so sweet :-)
thank you for being so sweet :-)
28th Jul 2016 3:05am
Wow David......you humble me......this is the easiest for me.......it's beautiful and sacred to literally feel what you write......when I write it's like a calmness and peacefulness consumes me......truly wonderful......there's no need to be jealous though my friend......cause you make your gift of words your own.......you bring many smiles and laughs to all who know you.....be honored about your writes.....they all touch souls in different ways.....I'm blessed I get to read you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
28th Jul 2016 5:43am
29th Jul 2016 4:30am
28th Jul 2016 7:56am
29th Jul 2016 4:33am
Oh Howlings.......my precious friend.......your words bring smiles and luv upon my page.......from a talent such as you it is an honor for sure......thank you my friend......purple luv & hugs xo :)
28th Jul 2016 12:45pm
29th Jul 2016 4:35am
Thank you 23......I'm so glad you enjoyed this.....it gave me beautiful feelings......so happy to see you stop by my way......purple luv & hugs xo :)
28th Jul 2016 10:40pm
You know full well the value of sharing souls Flower. One is NOT the loneliest number if your hearts beat in unison. The spiritual component of your work is so strong that I feel blessed to read it.
"looking into your shinning eyes
seeing deeply within your soul
just how sacredly you luv me"
Passion and eroticism are indispensable, but it's the sacred that really counts. Loved this Flower!
"looking into your shinning eyes
seeing deeply within your soul
just how sacredly you luv me"
Passion and eroticism are indispensable, but it's the sacred that really counts. Loved this Flower!
29th Jul 2016 4:41am
Hi Crow......your words always make my heart smile.......I feel so honored that you read me and share thoughts with me......it truly touches me......glad those words spoke to you......sacredness between souls......hearts and spirits is beyond precious......thank you for being a blessing to me.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
29th Jul 2016 3:50pm
30th Jul 2016 2:10am
Hey Again......thanks for the read and thought.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
4th Aug 2016 5:06pm
u and orphy
are the best over here
both read me behind veiled curtains
oldy no ?
I am a poet of
love
romance
and
mental dreamy dance
one without a soul
not a one in search of a hole
I am done
waiting at the cliff of time
a strong wind
is waiting for me
still till then it happens
I shall be coming
sincerely..
lovely poets ye
are the best over here
both read me behind veiled curtains
oldy no ?
I am a poet of
love
romance
and
mental dreamy dance
one without a soul
not a one in search of a hole
I am done
waiting at the cliff of time
a strong wind
is waiting for me
still till then it happens
I shall be coming
sincerely..
lovely poets ye
6th Aug 2016 4:54am
Hey Again.......this is so touching.......we all will reach our time when the winds become still and breath is no longer taken.......each moment in life we should be thankful for.......realize our true friends......move from those who bring darkness.......thank you for this beautiful touching gift of words.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
30th Jul 2016 10:15pm
Beautiful words of love, but shouldn't "shinning" (not a loving thing to do, especially e.g. to a football player) read "shining"?
31st Jul 2016 10:26pm
Thank you Solomon...glad you enjoyed. Dang those n's......I never know how many to use......LOL!! Thank you for the call out......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
2nd Aug 2016 6:00pm
So very beautiful. Words which make the heart smile, and the mind free.
Truly adore this piece.
Truly adore this piece.
6th Aug 2016 4:50am
Hi Heart......so appreciate a talent as you taking time to stop my way.......glad you enjoyed......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
7th Aug 2016 1:50am
This is a beautifully written poem. I can see the imagery in my head. And the photo is beautiful as well and goes very good with this piece. Thanks for sharing.
7th Aug 2016 3:28am
Hi Eswaller......I'm thrilled you've visited my page.......I'm so glad you felt my ink......it was a beautiful feeling as I wrote this......thank you for your kind words.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
9th Aug 2016 00:00am
Sweet thoughts of a lovely relationship. It is when souls meet that true love blossoms.
9th Aug 2016 9:13pm
Hi KOH.......thank you for visiting my page.......it is rare to feel another so sacredly within yourself.......when you do the flowers bloom along with eternal luv.......honored by the RL add on......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
12th Aug 2016 3:20am
Nice poem, strong ending.
12th Aug 2016 3:26am
Thank you London for smiling upon my ink.....glad you enjoyed it......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
16th Nov 2016 5:16pm
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17th Nov 2016 1:48am
Hey Adam......thank you for going back to the old ones......glad you liked this one.....it's a fav of mine......purple luv & hugs xo :)
