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Is it so much to ask, that the sun doesn't shine everyday, all day, relentlessly blue ?
Brilliant blue sky
Too much of a good thing
Clouds are sensual
A little moody goes a long way
Too much of a good thing
Clouds are sensual
A little moody goes a long way
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Re. Is it so much to ask, that the sun doesn't shine everyday, all day
17th Jul 2016 1:13pm
Re. Is it so much to ask, that the sun doesn't shine everyday, all day
17th Jul 2016 1:15pm
Re. Is it so much to ask, that the sun doesn't shine everyday, all day
17th Jul 2016 2:37pm
There's a reason she's called Mother Nature ... Mother Earth .. Those blue skies become broken by sorrow and pain.
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Re. Is it so much to ask, that the sun doesn't shine everyday, all day
17th Jul 2016 2:47pm
True dat
Had some skin cancer issues
Never the sun as the enemy till then
That said, partly cloudy is a beautiful thing, just a little bit of sun goes a long way for this bloke ....
Thx Lo
Had some skin cancer issues
Never the sun as the enemy till then
That said, partly cloudy is a beautiful thing, just a little bit of sun goes a long way for this bloke ....
Thx Lo
Re. Is it so much to ask, that the sun doesn't shine everyday, all day
18th Jul 2016 00:04am
Oh Poet...I'm wanting blue skies every day in our Dry Season but we're getting rain, like today...it'd probably suit you down to the ground... :-)
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18th Jul 2016 00:47am
Re. Is it so much to ask, that the sun doesn't shine everyday, all day
19th Jul 2016 00:41am
Re. Is it so much to ask, that the sun doesn't shine everyday, all day
19th Jul 2016 00:59am
Re. Is it so much to ask, that the sun doesn't shine everyday, all day
22nd Jul 2016 00:37am
Man I so agree with the premise of the piece - I for one have mood changes in blue sky sunshine, no question about it :-)
excellent write poet :-)
excellent write poet :-)
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Re. Is it so much to ask, that the sun doesn't shine everyday, all day
22nd Jul 2016 1:27am
I'm a moody fuck with skin cancer issues. I used to love the sun until the sun stopped loving me. That said, it's too fucking hot. Clouds are sexy ....