deepundergroundpoetry.com
Incoherent
I want to wind
Intertwine myself
Around you
Slipping curves
To nestle close
Against you
I want to warm you
With me
In all the ways
You can be warmed
Held close
Soothed
Freed from care
And
Even me when needs must be
I want urgency
In you
Transferred
To me
And
The immediacy
In me
Saturating
You
I want your breath
Fanning
My heatedness
And
My breath
Taken
I want to make a gift
Of myself
To thee
I want you
Incoherent
And
Me
As well…
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 15
reading list entries 0
comments 13
reads 1350
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re. Incoherent
21st May 2016 11:20pm
Re. Incoherent
Anonymous
22nd May 2016 4:13am
Most truly intimate, with the heat and closeness
This is sensoual , sexy, and your voice brings it home
Love this
This is sensoual , sexy, and your voice brings it home
Love this
1
Re. Incoherent
22nd May 2016 8:36am
I want you
Incoherent
And
Me
As well…
That's when you know it was good! Lol
Your voice could bring life to the phone book!
Incoherent
And
Me
As well…
That's when you know it was good! Lol
Your voice could bring life to the phone book!
1
Re. Incoherent
22nd May 2016 6:34pm
As usual reading work hear brings to mind a song. You present an image of shared urgency that epitomes the word "sensual".
1
Re. Incoherent
Anonymous
22nd May 2016 7:27pm
Sultry Savaja, simply gorgeous this is...the sensuality oozes from this and causes my screen to melt and dribble before me...the tip of your pen, on fire here my darling. Take a bow...
With love - Schiitaryn xoxo
With love - Schiitaryn xoxo
1
Re. Incoherent
Anonymous
23rd May 2016 9:17am
this is lovely, savaja
so intimate and passionate. excellent pen, real depth.
love,
miki
so intimate and passionate. excellent pen, real depth.
love,
miki
1
Re. Incoherent
23rd May 2016 11:09pm
Love it! SO sensual!
"I want your breath
Fanning
My heatedness
And
My breath
Taken"
Kiss,
Art
"I want your breath
Fanning
My heatedness
And
My breath
Taken"
Kiss,
Art
1
Re. Incoherent
30th May 2016 5:40am
Re. Incoherent
Anonymous
4th Jun 2016 9:56pm
Ahh, now this...THIS I want! Very sultry! ;)
1
Re. Incoherent
15th Jun 2016 10:05pm
Hi Savaja :) You read very well, your voice carries such feeling with it. I was memorised from the start. I really like the style & your choice of words because they each have their own tone which adds to the experience & mental imagery. The subject is very passionate & well crafted to be almost magical in it's own way. Excellent piece I'd say :)
1
Re. Incoherent
Anonymous
16th Oct 2017 2:44pm
damn...
0