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To Make You Feel My Luv
when rain kisses fall upon your face
you struggle with life's confusion
simply think of my warm embrace
shadows are upon your soul
tears continually bring dark thoughts
I will hold you thru the storm
there isn't much I wouldn't do for us
sending my heart....soul....spirit
to kiss yours across the ocean
to make you feel my luv
Song ~
To Make You Feel My Love ~ by Garth Brooks
http://youtu.be/QzuNKgTFkw8
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
you struggle with life's confusion
simply think of my warm embrace
shadows are upon your soul
tears continually bring dark thoughts
I will hold you thru the storm
there isn't much I wouldn't do for us
sending my heart....soul....spirit
to kiss yours across the ocean
to make you feel my luv
Song ~
To Make You Feel My Love ~ by Garth Brooks
http://youtu.be/QzuNKgTFkw8
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 5th May 2016
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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5th May 2016 3:25am
Thank you SS...sorry for the late response....had to get thru Mother's Day week......I appreciate your kind sweet words.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th May 2016 4:29am
I agree with Satan, this is touching.. I don't
think to have mastered this yet.
Very elegant purple beauty
-Howlings
think to have mastered this yet.
Very elegant purple beauty
-Howlings
11th May 2016 2:28am
HI Howlings.....thank you for smiling upon my page.....sorry I'm behind in responses.....had to get thru the busy week of Mother's Day......purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th May 2016 8:48am
11th May 2016 2:37am
You're such a sweet thing Poet.....I always appreciate your smile.....sorry for the lateness....had to deal with Mother's Day week......long hard week making others smile.....LOL!! Purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th May 2016 9:42am
lovely Flower your beautiful thoughts are sure to chase those shadows away :)
so lovely..
love Crim
so lovely..
love Crim
11th May 2016 2:41am
Beautiful Crim......I'm so pleased to see upon my page......you always make me smile......thank you so much for taking time to visit me......late response to you due to Mother's Day week......hope this finds you well sweet friend.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th May 2016 2:35pm
Simple, but caring words throughout this
poem, flower. There is nothing quite like
someone who truly cars about you to
hold and comfort you when life stabs and
wounds you. Yes indeed, caring arms is
what it is all about.
poem, flower. There is nothing quite like
someone who truly cars about you to
hold and comfort you when life stabs and
wounds you. Yes indeed, caring arms is
what it is all about.
11th May 2016 2:48am
Hi SG......you got this so right.....it's a wonderful feeling for sure......I'm a very fortunate soul......thank you for your awesome thoughts here......sorry for the delay of reponse.....been away with flowers for Mother's Day......hope all is well with you....thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th May 2016 2:40pm
11th May 2016 2:54am
Hey Kavik...always enjoy your smile upon my page.....glad you like this one......sorry I've been away...been doing flower after flower for Mother's Day.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
- Edited 5th May 2016 3:44pm
5th May 2016 3:42pm
Your heart is big and very tender. Your warm embrace
would be a loving spot to be. Beautiful picture a sunset kiss
within a purple hue. Lovely
would be a loving spot to be. Beautiful picture a sunset kiss
within a purple hue. Lovely
11th May 2016 2:56am
Hi SlowG......your words being a smile upon my heart......thank you for such sweet words and kindness.......sorry for being away...had to sink deep into flower world for Mother's Day.....hope all is well with you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th May 2016 5:04pm
if only in the snap
you had shown the centrality fixture
this would have been
an erotica
have a retake
madam flower
you had shown the centrality fixture
this would have been
an erotica
have a retake
madam flower
11th May 2016 2:57am
Hey Again....I worte this and chose the oic just the way I wanted it to be.....thanks for the suggestion though......sorry for the late response back....had to get thru a hard week of flowers.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
6th May 2016 5:54pm
u treat me like guys do frig back and forth daily morning hard woods on lkewise u add and remove me from your readers list gives me an impression of being frigged well let it be i cummm often
11th May 2016 3:01am
Hey Again...have not touched the reading list....so not sure what your talking about..... even gone for 3 days......xo :)
9th May 2016 6:22pm
u like erotica i see
when gals say
''cocks so wide''
i would have answered her u see
she blocked me
hard ons she can't bear
inside herz
she only loves sucking
11th May 2016 3:03am
What?? I think you've flipped out.....don't know who this is about...but I didn't block you or do anything against you...so chill out!!
