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Hers and His
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A whistling approval heard
She's a greedy bitch he'd say
though anything else after was muffled
as she enticed with gleaming treasure
Satiating her appetite
feeding his.
A whistling approval heard
She's a greedy bitch he'd say
though anything else after was muffled
as she enticed with gleaming treasure
Satiating her appetite
feeding his.
Published 14th Apr 2016
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15th Apr 2016 00:38am
This is such a nice short piece...i really enjoyed this Rose...made me think...thanks..
Love
J
Love
J
15th Apr 2016 6:12am
Anonymous
15th Apr 2016 3:57am
Nice Rose!
"Gleaming treasure"...
~ so lovely when all of you viewed as such! Bringing me smiles!
With love - Taryn xoxo
"Gleaming treasure"...
~ so lovely when all of you viewed as such! Bringing me smiles!
With love - Taryn xoxo
15th Apr 2016 6:17am
My treasure often to be wanting
excitable with knowing
Gleaming
enticingly so
In fact she's rather greedy when thoughts do
Dwell on him and what they can deliver together
Hehe sometines you just gotta get it down on here
excitable with knowing
Gleaming
enticingly so
In fact she's rather greedy when thoughts do
Dwell on him and what they can deliver together
Hehe sometines you just gotta get it down on here
