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Lost in Ourselves
Iconic coffee shop
Coffee for a buck
Piece of homemade pie
Solace from the hipster crowd
that's swills $5 burnt coffee
in one of those cramped mega places
Sit with me
Lost in ourselves
Honest lovers
The other side of town
Welcomes us
See you soon
Coffee for a buck
Piece of homemade pie
Solace from the hipster crowd
that's swills $5 burnt coffee
in one of those cramped mega places
Sit with me
Lost in ourselves
Honest lovers
The other side of town
Welcomes us
See you soon
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Re. Lost in Ourselves
30th Mar 2016 3:19am
You're on a roll, Poet. I'm enjoying every bit of it! You have a great eye. Loving the pictures to go with your great words! Keep them coming.
😊 Tommie
😊 Tommie
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30th Mar 2016 3:57am
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30th Mar 2016 3:58am
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30th Mar 2016 3:59am
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30th Mar 2016 4:20am
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30th Mar 2016 4:59pm
nice write fluid, and catchy but in a short amount of lines well done.
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30th Mar 2016 10:03pm
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Anonymous
30th Mar 2016 8:31pm
Honest lovers.
I love that. Well done, cowboy. Very well done.
I love that. Well done, cowboy. Very well done.
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30th Mar 2016 10:04pm
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Anonymous
30th Mar 2016 11:07pm
Peach. Crumb topping.
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30th Mar 2016 11:08pm
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Ahhh, Granite, luv ~ :-*
I'm really liking the other side of town and how that feels with well-made regular coffee and homemade pie...
Eroticism in motion.
You write a superb slice-of-life, luv, always have. :-*
I'm really liking the other side of town and how that feels with well-made regular coffee and homemade pie...
Eroticism in motion.
You write a superb slice-of-life, luv, always have. :-*
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1st Apr 2016 2:09am
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1st Apr 2016 2:45am
Thank you very much, luv. :-* Thought mayhap twas enough of just my lips...
Have them warm the pie
Have them warm the pie
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1st Apr 2016 2:53am
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2nd Apr 2016 2:01pm
I am with you on this I love old fashioned coffee shops and cafes - I hate the hipster scene which most poets here gravitate to it has no ambience worth a fuck and no real source of inspiration. I get most of my inspiration from other interesting places and people - hate following the current fashion :-)
I love this poem it reminds me of some of the cafes that I love to go to to break bread and swill tea with orfinary peoples like me :-)
I love this poem it reminds me of some of the cafes that I love to go to to break bread and swill tea with orfinary peoples like me :-)
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2nd Apr 2016 11:08pm