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She's A Four Letter Word
She comes off soft
but she's a bad girl
She's a four letter word = fuck
She'll drive him outta his head
with her feverish message
Killing him with desire
She looks at him with wistful
eye's and fades away
Her curves against his passage
but she's a bad girl
She's a four letter word = fuck
She'll drive him outta his head
with her feverish message
Killing him with desire
She looks at him with wistful
eye's and fades away
Her curves against his passage
Published 3rd Mar 2016
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3rd Mar 2016 4:55pm
The power of seductive curves and alluring glances. Beautiful Tommie!
4th Mar 2016 00:16am
To have that power with just a look is pretty amazing. Thank you very much W, glad you liked it. 😊
4th Mar 2016 00:19am
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3rd Mar 2016 6:24pm
Ah yes, the look and the curves that go with it. We've all seen it and been seduced by it. A wonderful poem tommielynn, it brings back memories.
John
John
4th Mar 2016 00:21am
Happy to be able to give you a flashback John, treasure those memories always!
Thank you for reading me and for your kind words 😊
Thank you for reading me and for your kind words 😊
3rd Mar 2016 6:47pm
Very good write tho IMO you dont need "=fuck" it actually cheapens the piece, leaving it out, firstly its already implied, an second gives the line more meaning by its omission
nice write :)
nice write :)
4th Mar 2016 00:30am
I put "=fuck" in the write as if the man was saying it out loud. He just had to say it. So I just had to put it in.
I appreciate your comment Freya, thank you 😊
I appreciate your comment Freya, thank you 😊
3rd Mar 2016 9:56pm
4th Mar 2016 00:31am
If you say it three times she might come!
Thank you so much drunkenplaywords 😊
Thank you so much drunkenplaywords 😊
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4th Mar 2016 3:13am
It's nice to hear every once in awhile.
Thank you John, happy you liked it 😊
Thank you John, happy you liked it 😊
4th Mar 2016 9:41pm
Another lusty imbibe from Tommie's Tasty Treats, Keep bringing those four-letter words.
5th Mar 2016 2:59am
