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One in a million
Yo , you know she's the one when you find her image in every song , yeah , you know she's the one when you always seem to get along , you know she's the one when nothing you ever do is wrong...
I just wish I could take back the mistakes
Treat her like a QUEEN and do all it takes
Treat her heart like glass and make sure it never breaks
FUCK if I could I'd steal her pain...yeah trade places
I'd lift her up to the thrown of the universe
Thinking of her as I write every word in every verse
I love her for better or worse
Yeah the biggest blessing in my life, FUCK THE CURSE
Yeah and I will fight the world to win her back
Call it desert storm cause I'm creating wars with this track
She's the only thing that I lack
Man! I'm fucking rich cause she's my own supply of high-grade crack
And for always she will be my Babygirl
But all she deserves is to dance under the stars , and I just love to watch her twist and twirl
Baby let's give it another go, You know : another whirl
Yeah I promise you more than just diamonds and pearls
She's running a marathon threw my mind
Yeh I can't see anything if love really blinds
The first time I met her I swore she shined
A girl like this is impossible to find
And I WILL try not to mess up again
Damn beautiful do you remember way back when?
Fuck those were the days let's go back to them
Thanks for being my one in a million : a true Gem
I just wish I could take back the mistakes
Treat her like a QUEEN and do all it takes
Treat her heart like glass and make sure it never breaks
FUCK if I could I'd steal her pain...yeah trade places
I'd lift her up to the thrown of the universe
Thinking of her as I write every word in every verse
I love her for better or worse
Yeah the biggest blessing in my life, FUCK THE CURSE
Yeah and I will fight the world to win her back
Call it desert storm cause I'm creating wars with this track
She's the only thing that I lack
Man! I'm fucking rich cause she's my own supply of high-grade crack
And for always she will be my Babygirl
But all she deserves is to dance under the stars , and I just love to watch her twist and twirl
Baby let's give it another go, You know : another whirl
Yeah I promise you more than just diamonds and pearls
She's running a marathon threw my mind
Yeh I can't see anything if love really blinds
The first time I met her I swore she shined
A girl like this is impossible to find
And I WILL try not to mess up again
Damn beautiful do you remember way back when?
Fuck those were the days let's go back to them
Thanks for being my one in a million : a true Gem
Published 9th Feb 2016
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10th Feb 2016 8:14am
This was well written, it was sharp and flowed well. The play of words were a lot of fun, I would end each paragraph with a wha-bam sound in mind. You can feel the love and desperation in it. Even I feel like this girl was special. Keep it up, chin up, what you wrote is spectacular! Xx (:
10th Feb 2016 5:58pm
10th Feb 2016 5:58pm
13th Feb 2016 12:22pm
It's a good accelerated growth when each verse picks up as if it were the first. That's a subtle vocal technique and its cool to see you demonstrate it.
