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Dad, It's Snowing!!
solid white plains
meet the horizon
crystalized
fine like powder
ice figures
sculpted by
free hand
on every tree
wind swaying
arctic breath
flowing silently
snowflakes dance
innocent eyes
childhood ideas
good memories
nestled inside
from the window
looking outward
deep in thought
weaving beauty
when a voice
so familiar
warms my soul
with splendor
my son says..
Dad, it’s snowing!!
meet the horizon
crystalized
fine like powder
ice figures
sculpted by
free hand
on every tree
wind swaying
arctic breath
flowing silently
snowflakes dance
innocent eyes
childhood ideas
good memories
nestled inside
from the window
looking outward
deep in thought
weaving beauty
when a voice
so familiar
warms my soul
with splendor
my son says..
Dad, it’s snowing!!
Published 3rd Feb 2016
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Anonymous
3rd Feb 2016 9:47pm
:) I love this, husband!
3rd Feb 2016 9:50pm
3rd Feb 2016 10:03pm
Beautiful I enjoyed the imagery you brought with your poem Dave
from the window
looking outward
deep in thought
weaving beauty
when a voice
so familiar
warms my soul
with splendor
my son says..
Dad, it’s snowing!!
So sweet Dave ")
Zazzles xoxoxox
from the window
looking outward
deep in thought
weaving beauty
when a voice
so familiar
warms my soul
with splendor
my son says..
Dad, it’s snowing!!
So sweet Dave ")
Zazzles xoxoxox
3rd Feb 2016 10:07pm
Thanks, Jackie.. for such kind words.. you know i rarely show my tender side.. loves you my sister..
Dave
Dave
4th Feb 2016 1:06am
4th Feb 2016 1:12am
4th Feb 2016 1:21am
4th Feb 2016 3:43am
Such a beautiful poem to read about your son.
It makes me think about what I would write about for my children if I ever have the chance to have any in the future.
Great poem Dave loved it very much :)
It makes me think about what I would write about for my children if I ever have the chance to have any in the future.
Great poem Dave loved it very much :)
4th Feb 2016 6:43pm
Thanks, Ms. Jackson.. i'm so glad you liked it.. i appreciate your kind words.. i'm sure when you have kids, you'll write beautiful poems for them.. honored to make your RL.. with love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
4th Feb 2016 6:45pm
Thanks, Wally.. i'm glad you enjoyed.. i appreciate your kind words.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
4th Feb 2016 8:31am
4th Feb 2016 6:47pm
Thanks, Red.. glad you liked it.. i appreciate your kind words, and continued support.. with love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
4th Feb 2016 8:55pm
Beautiful! Weaving images with such a heartwarming depth. Smiles. Thanks for sharing this moment captured. - blue angel oxox
5th Feb 2016 00:12am
Lady Blue.. i'm so glad you liked it.. i appreciate your kind words.. with love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
4th Feb 2016 11:30pm
An imagist dream Dave....beautiful...down here in Adelaide we don't get snow.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
5th Feb 2016 00:14am
Thanks, Harry.. so glad you liked it.. i appreciate your kind words.. Cheers Mate!!
Dave
Dave
5th Feb 2016 1:12am
I love poems about being a parent and the joys that come along with this role! Too many times I hear parents complain, not cool. <3
5th Feb 2016 1:27am
Thanks, Mysterious.. i love being a dad.. i don't always show my lighter side.. but it's always with me.. i appreciate your kind words.. with love..
Dave
Dave
8th Feb 2016 8:43pm
8th Feb 2016 9:45pm
