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Lori: Really want to dance with you
Fuck
Noah: Yes?
Lori: Capcasin in eye
Burrrrrnnnn
Noah: Milk
Lori: In my eye?
Noah: To the face will cure hot sauce burns. Or a moneyshot if you are lactose intolerant. I don't know my Queen. It works for drinking too much hot sauce. I say don't fucking try it. Your eyes are beautiful and too valuable to me.
Fuck
Noah: Yes?
Lori: Capcasin in eye
Burrrrrnnnn
Noah: Milk
Lori: In my eye?
Noah: To the face will cure hot sauce burns. Or a moneyshot if you are lactose intolerant. I don't know my Queen. It works for drinking too much hot sauce. I say don't fucking try it. Your eyes are beautiful and too valuable to me.
Published 28th Jan 2016
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28th Jan 2016 10:45pm
I admire your restraint Loki. A moneyshot should not contain capcasin or any other irritant. Have to preserve the light in her eyes and brightness of her smile. I'd love to hear more from Lori and Noah, texting or talking. They sound like the real thing in this perfect little write.
29th Jan 2016 9:17pm
I would never do a moneyshot. I just talk foul off the top and thus I have to dial that back. Alot. But while being muuuuch more refined and elegant Lori follows the same model. There's the Art of Vulgarity, with but one rule to follow: Be filthy as fuck, but never produce doggerel.
Thanks for catching the feeling crowfly!
Thanks for catching the feeling crowfly!
