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'Scratched-N the Itch to Worder'
*Bro. Naajir's pen 'woke'
my 'word beast' lol yea... I thank him*
Wit, Pushed-Power pulsates
particular particles partial
to pretentious n' explosively
dynamic matter...
Predictin' probable protrusion,
impossibly the fusion of usin'
a Worderous mind, includin'
these MYTHS, naives believe
in the fists, don't twist
the mists' delusion...
as thoughts scatter, shatter...
Within these 'papered' shreds
verse sheds from former
vest of safely woven syntax
cocked n' loaded, heat
from the chest...
The Mass Worderer's returned
at the gropin' pen's humbled
request thru express...
I seize this disease-UN-rest
a mess, eyes detest the bane
of misery...it's lack of wizardry
once backed into the 'black'
of liquid seas...
ball n' chained, still inclined
to stay bound... I'm unbound
Not confined to define
properly how to comprehend
a mind set free to upend the 'pen
spree' when it goes Massive-Me
Ass out, no doubt some will seek
to pass out pamphlets, scribbled
in gibberish glee, Oh gee...
"Like where can I get this?"
blarin' out "I'm a witness!"
Shaken by the verse slaughter
many will never SEE
Their mouths slung open
DOA...lastest victims
of thy ostentatious desire
to just Worder thee...
my 'word beast' lol yea... I thank him*
Wit, Pushed-Power pulsates
particular particles partial
to pretentious n' explosively
dynamic matter...
Predictin' probable protrusion,
impossibly the fusion of usin'
a Worderous mind, includin'
these MYTHS, naives believe
in the fists, don't twist
the mists' delusion...
as thoughts scatter, shatter...
Within these 'papered' shreds
verse sheds from former
vest of safely woven syntax
cocked n' loaded, heat
from the chest...
The Mass Worderer's returned
at the gropin' pen's humbled
request thru express...
I seize this disease-UN-rest
a mess, eyes detest the bane
of misery...it's lack of wizardry
once backed into the 'black'
of liquid seas...
ball n' chained, still inclined
to stay bound... I'm unbound
Not confined to define
properly how to comprehend
a mind set free to upend the 'pen
spree' when it goes Massive-Me
Ass out, no doubt some will seek
to pass out pamphlets, scribbled
in gibberish glee, Oh gee...
"Like where can I get this?"
blarin' out "I'm a witness!"
Shaken by the verse slaughter
many will never SEE
Their mouths slung open
DOA...lastest victims
of thy ostentatious desire
to just Worder thee...
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Re. 'Scratched-N the Itch to Worder'
22nd Nov 2015 1:40pm
I just became a willing victim to your inclination to worder... Throughly enjoyed darling!
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Re: Re. 'Scratched-N the Itch to Worder'
Aaawwww thank u!! I covet willing victims to 'worder' lol ur support
is a blessing :)
is a blessing :)
Re. 'Scratched-N the Itch to Worder'
22nd Nov 2015 1:49pm
Shaken by the verse slaughter
many will never SEE
Their mouths slung open
Love it! You have such a way with words POe, you really are the Marshall Mather's of the DU, and your clever, your different pen references were brilliant here, I am always duely impressed by you. I think honey if you wrote er day you would be published, I would recognise a POe piece, like a van Gogh or Escher, you have that sig style.
Gooooooshed enuff.
Your head is big enuff lol
Much love
Jennifer
many will never SEE
Their mouths slung open
Love it! You have such a way with words POe, you really are the Marshall Mather's of the DU, and your clever, your different pen references were brilliant here, I am always duely impressed by you. I think honey if you wrote er day you would be published, I would recognise a POe piece, like a van Gogh or Escher, you have that sig style.
Gooooooshed enuff.
Your head is big enuff lol
Much love
Jennifer
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Re: Re. 'Scratched-N the Itch to Worder'
22nd Nov 2015 2:41pm
Thank you... My day has been officially MADE. :) truly flattered n appreciate ur support :)
Re. 'Scratched-N the Itch to Worder'
22nd Nov 2015 10:22pm
yes bro...
i see you took the safety off
lettin words funnel
through the double barrel..
shots fired by a poetic assassin for hire..
Foever inspired
to fulfill his required quota
of quotable musings such as:.
"I seize this disease-UN-rest
a mess, eyes detest the bane
of misery...it's lack of wizardry
once backed into the 'black'
of liquid seas...
ball n' chained, still inclined
to stay bound... I'm unbound"
woooweee!!!
yes yes...
diggin this entire vibe my dude
eye to eye contact indeed!!!
i see you took the safety off
lettin words funnel
through the double barrel..
shots fired by a poetic assassin for hire..
Foever inspired
to fulfill his required quota
of quotable musings such as:.
"I seize this disease-UN-rest
a mess, eyes detest the bane
of misery...it's lack of wizardry
once backed into the 'black'
of liquid seas...
ball n' chained, still inclined
to stay bound... I'm unbound"
woooweee!!!
yes yes...
diggin this entire vibe my dude
eye to eye contact indeed!!!
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Re: Re. 'Scratched-N the Itch to Worder'
24th Nov 2015 1:05am
Lol u said that like u didn't completely
incinerate UR piece! lol... But I of course thank u graciously n always bro. :)
incinerate UR piece! lol... But I of course thank u graciously n always bro. :)
Re. 'Scratched-N the Itch to Worder'
23rd Nov 2015 00:09am
Ahh the Mass Worderer strikes again!! absolutely loved this fabulous flow
Fav lines:
Not confined to define
properly how to comprehend
a mind set free to upend the 'pen
spree' when it goes Massive-Me
Fav lines:
Not confined to define
properly how to comprehend
a mind set free to upend the 'pen
spree' when it goes Massive-Me
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Re: Re. 'Scratched-N the Itch to Worder'
23rd Nov 2015 9:54am
Yes HE did huh? lol... So happy you are not only familiar but enjoy his wordous ranting a lol... Thank you much my dear! :)
Re. 'Scratched-N the Itch to Worder'
23rd Nov 2015 3:45pm
Ha ha... A poet who speaks or, more accurately, writes in tongues. An idea whose time was long overdue. :)
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Re: Re. 'Scratched-N the Itch to Worder'
24th Nov 2015 1:08am
Lol yea, well the 'Worderer is a creation I dreamt up to do battle with my two real life bros. Who are in my opinion two of the very best urban poets I know :) thanks a bunch dude, truly appreciate it :)
Re. 'Scratched-N the Itch to Worder'
24th Nov 2015 7:51pm
*walking away from this page like a 1970 pimp, with a gangsta lean and peace sign in the air, yelling at the top of my lungs,*
" far out, I can dig it, cool beans, groovy dude, it's dynomite!" ;)
" far out, I can dig it, cool beans, groovy dude, it's dynomite!" ;)
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Re: Re. 'Scratched-N the Itch to Worder'
24th Nov 2015 10:57pm
Hands down a top 10 best comment ever!! Thank u my dear! I'm lol n blushing lol
Re. 'Scratched-N the Itch to Worder'
5th Dec 2015 9:55am
hooooooleeeee hells bells Poe, how'd i miss this in my updates [?] bad kitten, bad kitten & damn awful updates!
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"I seize this disease-UN-rest
a mess, eyes detest the bane
of misery...it's lack of wizardry
once backed into the 'black'
of liquid seas...
ball n' chained, still inclined
to stay bound... I'm unbound”
^^^^^^^^^
mind. blown. papi
this was feckin' awesome
xo
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"I seize this disease-UN-rest
a mess, eyes detest the bane
of misery...it's lack of wizardry
once backed into the 'black'
of liquid seas...
ball n' chained, still inclined
to stay bound... I'm unbound”
^^^^^^^^^
mind. blown. papi
this was feckin' awesome
xo
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Re: Re. 'Scratched-N the Itch to Worder'
5th Dec 2015 7:57pm
Aaaawwww...mi amor, y caliente mamacita!! I'm over the top happy this made ur list, n yea... Bad kitty, c'mere n let me give u a good lickin' lol
Thank u :)
Thank u :)
Re. 'Scratched-N the Itch to Worder'
Anonymous
23rd Dec 2015 9:45pm
Wonderful use of alliteration! I've often told people that poetry doesn't necessarily rhyme and doesn't have to rhyme. This is such a perfect example to show people how to make use of different methods to round off a poem.
Loved loved loved the explosive sounds in the 1st paragraph, and it then being reinforced byt stating "explosively
dynamic matter... " - perfect example of alliteration
Loved loved loved the explosive sounds in the 1st paragraph, and it then being reinforced byt stating "explosively
dynamic matter... " - perfect example of alliteration
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Re. 'Scratched-N the Itch to Worder'
23rd Dec 2015 11:21pm
Aaaawww... Touchin my lil heart... Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed
yea, funny enough I actually wrote a piece where I stated "poetry doesn't have to rhyme" for me, it tends to be my usual mode, but I assure you I've done many NON rhyming pieces too lol. N yea, it generally 'happens' naturally for me :). Appreciate u deeply :)
yea, funny enough I actually wrote a piece where I stated "poetry doesn't have to rhyme" for me, it tends to be my usual mode, but I assure you I've done many NON rhyming pieces too lol. N yea, it generally 'happens' naturally for me :). Appreciate u deeply :)
Re. 'Scratched-N the Itch to Worder'
24th Dec 2015 11:29am
Re: Re. 'Scratched-N the Itch to Worder'
24th Dec 2015 1:56pm
Aaawww... Well I'm honored to have
one be a favorite of yours! :) thank you
n happy holidays to you :)
one be a favorite of yours! :) thank you
n happy holidays to you :)