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18th Nov 2015 6:51pm
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Re: Re. Aftertaste
19th Nov 2015 5:11pm
Hi todski28, thanks for stopping by!
Oh, if you want more just add another 17 syllables and make your dream come true :-).
Thank you for your kind words :-). In the meantime I'm sort of haiku trained and not really able to produce story poems. Just the other way around. I should feel limited by that but every time when I've done a free verse poem of substantial length I feel like babbling and I cut it down to 17 syllables. Crazy, huh? So everyone should do what they can best and it is important to have all styles here, isn't it?
Thank you for the exchange :-)!
Oh, if you want more just add another 17 syllables and make your dream come true :-).
Thank you for your kind words :-). In the meantime I'm sort of haiku trained and not really able to produce story poems. Just the other way around. I should feel limited by that but every time when I've done a free verse poem of substantial length I feel like babbling and I cut it down to 17 syllables. Crazy, huh? So everyone should do what they can best and it is important to have all styles here, isn't it?
Thank you for the exchange :-)!
Re. Aftertaste
Anonymous
18th Nov 2015 6:58pm
I love the power of 17 syllables
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19th Nov 2015 5:13pm
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Anonymous
20th Nov 2015 6:38am
lol - you are really good at Haiku too kind lady! I love that in 3 lines, so much can be said, making a page full of rhyme and verse null and void. Like your beautiful Haiku here
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Anonymous
18th Nov 2015 7:38pm
Miss Chi,
you know exactly the strings to pull when offering up a taste of your haiku ;-) Enjoyed!
tornado
you know exactly the strings to pull when offering up a taste of your haiku ;-) Enjoyed!
tornado
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Re: Re. Aftertaste
19th Nov 2015 5:17pm
You put that really nicely, tornado! I'm glad you enjoyed! I as well love your witty and juicy poems :-)!
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19th Nov 2015 5:19pm
Re. Aftertaste
18th Nov 2015 9:55pm
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19th Nov 2015 5:26pm
At least I try, JeJe. I think my limited vocabulary fits the haiku form perfectly :-)))! Although that would imply defameing the haiku form ...
Re. Aftertaste
19th Nov 2015 00:16am
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19th Nov 2015 5:27pm
Re. Aftertaste
19th Nov 2015 1:33am
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19th Nov 2015 5:30pm
But hey, you could take lessons :-). And sometimes it's not only about the right chords but about playing at all :-). Thanks, Paul...
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19th Nov 2015 6:22am
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19th Nov 2015 5:33pm
Yes, sometimes the aftertaste lasts and lasts and lasts ... Scents and touches and thoughts.
Thank you, Rain for the insightful comment! xo
Thank you, Rain for the insightful comment! xo
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19th Nov 2015 7:31am
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19th Nov 2015 5:34pm
That's absolutely right, John! We need both of it to be fulfilled. Thank you so much!
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19th Nov 2015 10:45am
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19th Nov 2015 5:35pm
Re. Aftertaste
20th Nov 2015 00:57am
"Aftertaste of lust" ...
This is palatable within itself. Great line that pulls the "chords".
Bravo!
This is palatable within itself. Great line that pulls the "chords".
Bravo!
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22nd Nov 2015 1:32am
Glad to hear that I might have pulled your chords! Thanks, Lobo for your much appreciated words!