Boundless

beautifully written Chiyo... I am a fan of senryu... you're a mastery of them ^_^

We love to thank you for your nice comment! As it is a fruitful collaboration, the praise must also go to applepie77 :-).

Absolutely enjoyed this

Glad you did, Sadsmiles :-). Absolutely enjoyed your kind words!

"this too, too solid flesh..."
marinates in love..
oh yes..:)

Hence it's better to digest, right?
Love your comments!

elegant, simply sublime

Blush ... we're simply glad about your too kind comment, DeanD!

We aim to please, dear Gabriel, and are glad that you like our collab haiku :-). Thank you so much! Your warm comments are always welcome!

Miss Chi & applepie77. . .cheers to you both. . .a lovely, lovely write. . .xoxo, Devlin;)

Thank you, Devlin! Happy you like it! It's lovely to collaborate with applepie77, always prolific and fun :-).

romance, softly engraved...

You know that your comment on our last haiku set off a lot of thinking? Thanks for that too, John! xo

I enjoyed this because there's a duality in it's interpretation, firstly lover to lover ...

... but it also reminded me of the birth of my daughters, and the endless hope I had for their futures ... And I wondered as a young father would I meet their needs? Would I leave the right impressions?  

Great ink! Bravo!

I'm excited that the haiku reminded you of more than of a poem speaking of lovers.  
 
Love always leaves its imprints on others, especially on our children. I know what you mean and I know about those doubts. Will we be enough? I'm absolutely sure that you left the right impressions, Lobo.  
Thank you so much for the shared thoughts ...

Beautiful !

Thank you so much, JeJe!