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Evidence
Traces on white skin
Love odes become visible
Evidence of lust
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Collaboration with applepie77
Love odes become visible
Evidence of lust
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Collaboration with applepie77
Published 25th Sep 2015
| Edited 26th Sep 2015
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25th Sep 2015 9:14pm
The idea of physical signs of love making as poetry is romantic. Brava!
It's like making visible the abstract concept of love. We thank you so much, Gahddess_Worship!
25th Sep 2015 9:35pm
25th Sep 2015 11:27pm
Out of thy mouth it is a wonderful compliment and even more.
Thank you so much, Paul, from both of us!
Thank you so much, Paul, from both of us!
26th Sep 2015 00:40am
beautifully written Chiyo... you execute the senryu perfectly... and it speaks volume... awesome ink!
26th Sep 2015 2:25pm
Thank you so much, MagicVizions. The collabs with applepie77 bear fresh friut :-)!
26th Sep 2015 6:47am
26th Sep 2015 2:56pm
Anonymous
26th Sep 2015 10:12pm
. . .*stunning*. . .
28th Sep 2015 9:39pm
26th Sep 2015 10:16pm
28th Sep 2015 9:52pm
We're glad that you enjoyed our haiku, dear Rain :-) because I love your poems and your opinion means a lot! xo
