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Μooń Dânse
…..and along “The Bank”,
the big brown doors opened up
into a room decorated in “high-art” style
somewhat sophisticated
somewhat black and mild,
like a gentle breeze....
…..she walks in greeting the room with a sexy smile
and the music blows so damned cool
the ambiance of subdued light
set a very romantic mood
libations poured with a hint of
secret and just a little sin
the scent of pink pepper,
geranium,
lilac,
peach,
mandarin,
patchouli,
amber
wafts in.....
....she sits at a tall table
upon a long, tall stool.
beneath the bold geometric printing
and colors and shapes
of her au couture dress
the sheen of her beautiful, silken legs
shewn even longer...
….and each verse of my melody waned stronger
“..well, it's a marvelous night for a moondance
with the stars up above in your eyes
a fantabulous night to make romance
'neath the cover of October skies”
and the translucent gleam
of brown liquor elicits
seductive glances,
unrehearsed and unscripted ....
“....can I just have one more moondance with you, my love
can I just make some more romance with you, my love “
and oh, how we danced past midnight
approaching a certain bewitching,
fingers perusing the small of her back uncovered,
the scent of arousal sensually twitching
between us
in a room full of lowly sinners,
there's just she and I
my cheek against her softness
my hands brushing that hint of …..derriere
barely hidden from sight
mellowed moods chasing all our inhibitions into the night
pleasantly surprised
as you wrap your soft legs and thighs
around my waist
and hold onto me tight.......
“...well, I want to make love to you tonight
I can't wait 'til the morning has come
and I know that the time is just right
and straight into my arms you will run”
and the music fades “ in a silent way”
the patrons have but all gone
the band has collected their pay......
…...and I am held spellbound
by the sparkle in your eye
against the dim corner light
I await your soft, sensual reply.......
“....can I just have one more moondance with you, my love
can I just make some more romance with you, my love “
[font=Times New Roman](this work was heavily *seduced* by Van Morrison's, "Moondance" and a certain young lady at the table across from my piano last night.....) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yd9p_KqVCQs
Published 31st Aug 2015
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31st Aug 2015 9:57am
Just two spelling corrections:
"somewhat black and mild,
like a GENTLE breeze." (I don't think breezes have any blood, Jewish or GENTILE)
"..brown liquor ELICITS
seductive glances."
The physical closeness of the couple as described matches the picture.
"somewhat black and mild,
like a GENTLE breeze." (I don't think breezes have any blood, Jewish or GENTILE)
"..brown liquor ELICITS
seductive glances."
The physical closeness of the couple as described matches the picture.
31st Aug 2015 12:10pm
1st Sep 2015 6:28am
3rd Sep 2015 00:54am
MMM~ oooh yes a breezy sexy delight!...the super fantasy of connecting with a stranger and dancing the night. *in a room full of lowly sinners just she and I. and this song - I adore this song, sung by al jarreau. you've taken me back to my jazz club days.
18th Sep 2016 4:09am
As soon as I saw the title, I knew what the inspiration was...
Such a seductive and sensual piece!
The beautiful imagery you painted brought me to that place...
Moondance... one of my favorite songs, in fact...
it was my online name before I changed it into Duende some years ago...
Such a seductive and sensual piece!
The beautiful imagery you painted brought me to that place...
Moondance... one of my favorite songs, in fact...
it was my online name before I changed it into Duende some years ago...
