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Will I Be......
.....waiting a million years
in the pool of our dreams
seeing your reflection
smiling back at me
your eyes stay focused
as I strip out of these blue jeans
white shirt tossed a side
I dive into you to catch a kiss
as the waters warmness consumes me
you consume my mind
can feel your arms wrap around me
holding me like I need
I need to know my sunshine....my star.....
say you need my luv
say you want me
say you remember us
say you will be mine
I'll luv ya till the end of time
even if it maybe a million years
as my heart cries being without you
my next breath I inhale is all of you
filling this longing of wanting within me
feeling our luv with each tear that falls
why must you make me wait
as my heart visualizes us dancing all night long
(Dedicated to Jason & Lily)
(Song "Blue Jeans ~ Dana Del Ray")
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
in the pool of our dreams
seeing your reflection
smiling back at me
your eyes stay focused
as I strip out of these blue jeans
white shirt tossed a side
I dive into you to catch a kiss
as the waters warmness consumes me
you consume my mind
can feel your arms wrap around me
holding me like I need
I need to know my sunshine....my star.....
say you need my luv
say you want me
say you remember us
say you will be mine
I'll luv ya till the end of time
even if it maybe a million years
as my heart cries being without you
my next breath I inhale is all of you
filling this longing of wanting within me
feeling our luv with each tear that falls
why must you make me wait
as my heart visualizes us dancing all night long
(Dedicated to Jason & Lily)
(Song "Blue Jeans ~ Dana Del Ray")
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Will I Be......
25th Aug 2015 3:27pm
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26th Aug 2015 5:00am
Awe JW.....I was just thinking of you...was going to send a shout out to you.....thank you my friend for taking time to come my way.....always appreciate you......xo :)
Re. Will I Be......
25th Aug 2015 3:30pm
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26th Aug 2015 5:02am
Hey Kavik.....you always make me smile......I'm so happy for your friendship and kindness you bring my way.....thank you!!! Xo :)
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25th Aug 2015 3:40pm
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28th Aug 2015 1:30am
Precious Crim......thank you for your beautiful words......always smile when you visit......thank you.....luv and hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Will I Be......
28th Aug 2015 1:34am
Sweet S......you make me smile with every visit.....they are a precious couple and friends to me......this song was so inspirational.....thank you for all your encouragement......it helps me to write.....luv and hugs xo :)
Re. Will I Be......
25th Aug 2015 7:33pm
This one really soars, Flower! This first stanza is kind of an intro with your wait. Then second goes into action a bit comically with the focusing eyes, the removal of jeans and shirt by way of preparation. Then you really take off, and the romance prevails. Excellent, Flower, and really enjoyed the vid!
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Crow you are one of the reasons I still am here......I always luv your responses....at times I see what I wrote in a different way cause of your views......I'm very humbled for to share words and thoughts with me....glad you liked the vid.....in my eyes your among the best here.....sending luv and hugs your way......xo :)
Re. Will I Be......
25th Aug 2015 8:28pm
A very sweet poem n even sweeter gesture for another! Keep pushing that pen my friend :)
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28th Aug 2015 1:43am
Hey Poet......what a great smile I always have when you stop my way......glad you like this piece.....thank you for the encouragement......xo :)
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26th Aug 2015 6:20am
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28th Aug 2015 1:53am
Awe Lily...my precious friend.....I'm honored to have written this for you and Jason.....thank you for your friendship......luv and hugs xoxo :)
Re. Will I Be......
26th Aug 2015 10:28pm
beautifully crafted beginning to end Flower... fits so well with the song too... magical :D
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28th Aug 2015 2:02am
Hey Magic.....glad to see you again......so happy you liked this one......the video is brilliant and very inspirational......you always make me smile.....luv and hugs your way xo :)
Re. Will I Be......
26th Aug 2015 10:29pm
you know what flower that is a very nice poem wrote very well enjoyed the read great poem of luv
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28th Aug 2015 2:04am
You know what Glen......you're a wonderful friend...thank you for your sweetness.....xo :)
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27th Aug 2015 6:24am
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28th Aug 2015 2:14am
Hey Again......well...what can I say......I write the graceful way I feel it.....have to be me.....xo :)
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27th Mar 2020 10:12pm
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Re: Re. Will I Be......
29th Mar 2020 4:30am
Hey Kfn.......thank you for smiling upon my ink.......glad you liked this one.......purple luv & hugs xo :)