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I nearly cried
I want to climb on top of you
Work you into my tight
Wet
Once you're firmly ensconced
(No, don't move)
I want to lean down and kiss
Long
Tongues playing together
Twisting, twining, twirling
My breasts against your chest
Suckling at your lips
Your lower lip between mine
Teasing you
Drawing that lip into my mouth
Nibbling
Ahhh
See what you do to me
You're drenched
Slathered in my wet
(no, I said, don't move)
I swirl my hips
Lazily
Rise up
Slowly
Ease down halfway
Then up again
The sudden plunge down
Engulfing your cock
Shocks noises from you
(makes me moan too - I nearly cry, you feel so good)
As we engage back and forth, in and out, I am brought to tears by how you feel within me, by the way you caress my inner walls, stroke against me, touch, piercing me afresh...
Published 14th Aug 2015
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14th Aug 2015 12:43pm
Oh how your words cause one to want to indulge your fantasies.....so descriptive and so damned real. (....and my mornings are my most erotic) #torture
15th Aug 2015 7:40pm
Ahhh, Mr_Mahogany_Wood, luv ~ :-*
Thank you so very much. :-*
Normally, I'd feel some twinge of remorse for torturing you (I'd be rather stricken, actually, and seek to make amends :-*), but I must admit, luv (shamelessly), to my inordinate gratification here for I can tell you this.
You torment me mercilessly; I leave your poems these days more oft than not drenched, wishing I were clenched about... ;-*
Thank you so very much. :-*
Normally, I'd feel some twinge of remorse for torturing you (I'd be rather stricken, actually, and seek to make amends :-*), but I must admit, luv (shamelessly), to my inordinate gratification here for I can tell you this.
You torment me mercilessly; I leave your poems these days more oft than not drenched, wishing I were clenched about... ;-*
14th Aug 2015 1:41pm
Anonymous
14th Aug 2015 1:46pm
what a way to start my morning!
i think i need a cold shower.
i think i need a cold shower.
14th Aug 2015 2:02pm
14th Aug 2015 2:08pm
Savaja, you are a champion of sensual composition! Your descriptions in this piece are an erotic masterpiece. Bravisima!
I love "piercing me afresh"
And the way you read "you feel so good" is super sexy.
14th Aug 2015 3:34pm
14th Aug 2015 4:15pm
I love a woman on top, all the better to see her in action. Spectacular work Savaja! A turn on that almost brought me to tears...
14th Aug 2015 5:44pm
hard hits
women enjoy
when she rides and controls his small boy
he cries also faster my love
let the velvetty fuck me
and as my sheaht goes back and forth
just tear me
wow
now i have cum
don't move
i can't bear it
i wonder how you do
when i tear it
you are a fucking love
cum have some
women enjoy
when she rides and controls his small boy
he cries also faster my love
let the velvetty fuck me
and as my sheaht goes back and forth
just tear me
wow
now i have cum
don't move
i can't bear it
i wonder how you do
when i tear it
you are a fucking love
cum have some
14th Aug 2015 9:47pm
The sudden plunge down
Engulfing your cock
Shocks noises from you
(makes me moan too - I nearly cry, you feel so good)
As we engage back and forth, in and out, I am brought to tears by how you feel within me, by the way you caress my inner walls, stroke against me, touch, piercing me afresh..
by far my fave section. really good
Engulfing your cock
Shocks noises from you
(makes me moan too - I nearly cry, you feel so good)
As we engage back and forth, in and out, I am brought to tears by how you feel within me, by the way you caress my inner walls, stroke against me, touch, piercing me afresh..
by far my fave section. really good
15th Aug 2015 5:21am
The rhythm of the lines is nearly faultless. Your spoken words seemed a bit too slow and quiet to match the action. I like how you're getting into the habit of not writing that word we all know, and because you don't outright mention the reference, allows our imaginations to make a lubricious image of its own.
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16th Aug 2015 2:48am
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16th Aug 2015 9:34am
Oh, this just build and builds to that perfect ending.
"As we engage back and forth, in and out, I am brought to tears by how you feel within me, by the way you caress my inner walls, stroke against me, touch, piercing me afresh"
Beautifully erotic piece here. Very well done.
Michael
"As we engage back and forth, in and out, I am brought to tears by how you feel within me, by the way you caress my inner walls, stroke against me, touch, piercing me afresh"
Beautifully erotic piece here. Very well done.
Michael
16th Aug 2015 2:19pm
Beautifully done, so sensual. Huge build up to wonderful climax. Such
a very sexy voice over. Wonderful
hot read on a sleepy Sunday morning.
a very sexy voice over. Wonderful
hot read on a sleepy Sunday morning.
16th Aug 2015 7:22pm
17th Aug 2015 3:52am
The title is so very appropriate. I knew it was the beginning of a delectable treat. Emotions this intense are often difficult to accurately express. But, you delivered in spades!
Exemplary!
C.
Exemplary!
C.
19th Aug 2015 2:09am
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