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A kiss 💋
It was happening.
After 4 giggle filled years of wanting to.
Sleep overs,
our heads on pillows of girlish thoughts and secrets.
Dreams told of endless tomorrows.
Faces practically touching.
Those pouty pink lips mere inches away,
Wanting so badly to feel them.
To taste her bubble gum scented tongue.
And she was the one to break our innocence!
To put her long tan arms arround my neck,
Lean in slowly,
And kiss me!
Delight of delights of delights!
What might be next?
Explore the delicious mystery beneath the dewy fuzz of her peach fish?
A word I'd read and thought she must be the authors muse.
Surely she would,
Taste of peaches and summer.
Delight of delights of delights!
Something so brand new,
It was happening. 💋
After 4 giggle filled years of wanting to.
Sleep overs,
our heads on pillows of girlish thoughts and secrets.
Dreams told of endless tomorrows.
Faces practically touching.
Those pouty pink lips mere inches away,
Wanting so badly to feel them.
To taste her bubble gum scented tongue.
And she was the one to break our innocence!
To put her long tan arms arround my neck,
Lean in slowly,
And kiss me!
Delight of delights of delights!
What might be next?
Explore the delicious mystery beneath the dewy fuzz of her peach fish?
A word I'd read and thought she must be the authors muse.
Surely she would,
Taste of peaches and summer.
Delight of delights of delights!
Something so brand new,
It was happening. 💋
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Re. A kiss 💋
6th Aug 2015 3:19pm
Mmmmmm n to think it all started with a kiss!! Delight of delights I'm sure!! Only thing better would be to offer an assist lol... Very sexy stuff my dear! :)
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6th Aug 2015 4:06pm
The fappening for me, honey. You wrote up only the appetizer here...I look forward to read about your dessert.
And those lips pop up everywhere in your comments. Hehe
And those lips pop up everywhere in your comments. Hehe
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6th Aug 2015 4:09pm
Lol fappening. Well it was only the appetizer. We were innocent. Lol crack me up.💋
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2015 5:21pm
Taking a ride on the super feel of adventure into unknown places (I think).
Relax -- if you can -- and allow it to envelop you to senses exotic and grippingly sinful . . .
Relax -- if you can -- and allow it to envelop you to senses exotic and grippingly sinful . . .
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6th Aug 2015 5:41pm
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6th Aug 2015 9:13pm
Thank you Gabriel. I know Ive read you and enjoyed, i will have to go back this evening and take ananother good look. 💋
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6th Aug 2015 9:15pm
And im happy ypu smiled. Its a rediculous and perfect word I borrowed from Still life With Woodpecker.💋
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2015 00:34am
A delightful image from innocent discovery. Like all your fans, I lust for more Jen.
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7th Aug 2015 4:46am
This loss of innocence was once taboo. Even though it was very boys fantasy to see.
Sweet, sexy little write. enjoyed :) k2m
Sweet, sexy little write. enjoyed :) k2m
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7th Aug 2015 6:29am
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8th Aug 2015 6:03am
mmm such tasteful words, wish i was there ;) haha loved reading this xo
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8th Aug 2015 8:59pm
Lol tasteful words. Im thrilled i was there. Thanks for reading and commenting! Will be reading you. 💋
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Mmm., must get me some kisses
like these! oo.I feel perky & stimulated mentally & physically weakened. Must
endure the quivers you have shoved
upon me..
I am wanting..no Mmh needing.
A beautiful pleasing piece of you shared.
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9th Aug 2015 3:03am
I wish i could write the sound that response made cum out of me. Hamffughuaah! Was basically it pheonetically, but no. Made me smile, giggle, and gasp. Lol thank you! 💋
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9th Aug 2015 3:45am
Whoa Jen.....I was pretty cooled down from the last write I read of you and now look.....I'm a sweaty mess again.......THANK YOU!!! Xo :)
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9th Aug 2015 3:48am
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9th Aug 2015 6:04am
awesome.....loved it.......unique piece making both men and women fans of yours stimulated...tells a lot abt your pen...keep them cummin
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17th Aug 2015 4:07pm
Love's first bloom opening. I loved it, the scene played in my mind wonderfully with a smile on my face at her satisfaction and still wanting more. A beautiful piece of work. Lovely.
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17th Aug 2015 4:24pm
Umm. Yes. Thank you! Just read a very good one of yours, voices. The title has slipped my head. I will go back and look so it is here and recomend ed to others. 💋
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17th Aug 2015 5:41pm
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18th Aug 2015 9:50am
Didnt bore me at all. Thank you for your comment. You picked a couple of pieces that are different for me. Nice to see you here. Have enjoyed your work! You have made a good start on the DU! I hope you are feeling more comfy here. I saw you got some good feedback! Thats awesome newgod. Btw, i dig the name. 💋
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17th Oct 2015 9:11pm
Gorgeous poem of a first sensual encounter. I loved the set up at the beginning. A sleep over. What a perfect way to start. And then the beautiful kiss. Innocence lost in the arms of a woman. I think a first kiss for a woman would be better with another female. The softness and gentleness make for a wonderful start. Your ending was truly inspired.
Taste of peaches and summer.
Delight of delights of delights!
Something so brand new,
It was happening.
I love this one honey. It artistic and gentle like all erotic initiations should be. ;-)
Loving you all of you,
John
Taste of peaches and summer.
Delight of delights of delights!
Something so brand new,
It was happening.
I love this one honey. It artistic and gentle like all erotic initiations should be. ;-)
Loving you all of you,
John
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