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purpose
the things
that
kill me
are the most
precious
to have
around
they
fulfill
their purpose
unlike any
human being
that
kill me
are the most
precious
to have
around
they
fulfill
their purpose
unlike any
human being
Published 2nd Aug 2015
| Edited 5th Oct 2015
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2nd Aug 2015 9:53pm
3rd Aug 2015 1:28pm
Seems to me to be a consumerist throw-out and I like that about it. I would lose the space between the two stanzas as I don't think it adds to the poem, imo.
