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Whenever Woman
Said you were my forever woman,
Yet you were their "whenever" woman.
Gave me pictures of love and trust.
Gave them your insatiable lust.
A "semi-close2maybe" there,
And I couldn't find you anywhere.
Oh, it broke me across the miles,
To learn that I was not your smiles.
The endearments we used to share,
The "kisses there... and there... and there!"
Like candy, shared with everyone.
There were no limits to your "fun."
In heated moments you would pant ,
And gush for them all, need on tap .
Tell them to always cum by you...
And so, as they did, you did too.
Should have cut my eyes, cold from head,
The day I stumbled here and read.
But no, I chose to honor you,
Forgive your lies... your cheating too.
Yet now you curse me that it hurts,
As if this were my just deserts.
Now done with me and moving on
To again play Lil-Miss Wanton.
Yeah, you called me "your best playmate"
In throes of lust, sealing our fate.
For how many playmates could there be
In fifteen years loving just one 'sides me?
Oh I won't sweat it, cause I know
How your kind always cum, then go.
Though I may not hold you forever,
One anon PM, you're still mine "whenever."
Published 30th Jul 2015
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30th Jul 2015 1:26pm
you're welcome to tell me to keep my giant jew nose out of your inkwell, but I'm gonna say this anyhow;
i can well understand the need to write something this scathing, some venomous vent to clear your lungs of a lover's lingering breath... 'tis to be expected when tensions/emotions run high, when our hearts can't catch up with our mind knowing it's over... sometimes we hurt so badly it feels like we're mourning someone who's still alive & apparently having a ball when we're gathering the pieces of ourselves that we keep throwing at them...
... it's time's like these, when we feel the stab of rejection, we so often forget that we are/were 50% of the problem (yup, that knowledge sucks donkey balls) & sometimes (even bigger donkey balls) they're just not that into us
it doesn't make the hurt, the need to lash out like a wounded animal any less; but it's a little perspective when one's blinded by heartache
*
anyhoos, now that i've done a fantastic impression of my mother; your poem's well written, the emotions palpable, imagery striking
i get it
hugs to you, mister
~ k
i can well understand the need to write something this scathing, some venomous vent to clear your lungs of a lover's lingering breath... 'tis to be expected when tensions/emotions run high, when our hearts can't catch up with our mind knowing it's over... sometimes we hurt so badly it feels like we're mourning someone who's still alive & apparently having a ball when we're gathering the pieces of ourselves that we keep throwing at them...
... it's time's like these, when we feel the stab of rejection, we so often forget that we are/were 50% of the problem (yup, that knowledge sucks donkey balls) & sometimes (even bigger donkey balls) they're just not that into us
it doesn't make the hurt, the need to lash out like a wounded animal any less; but it's a little perspective when one's blinded by heartache
*
anyhoos, now that i've done a fantastic impression of my mother; your poem's well written, the emotions palpable, imagery striking
i get it
hugs to you, mister
~ k
30th Jul 2015 4:53pm
Lol... When someone posts a poem like this, Katja dear, they are asking for it. I applaud you that you weren't afraid to step up and put your two cents in. Don't agree with a lot of what you said... Some, just not a lot. There are a lot of misconceptions here I think. Not much to be done about that as I am not in personal messages with evryone on this board so my side of the story never gets heard. Either way, I'm glad you found the poem worthy of a reply
Promise a more "poetic" endeavor next time around. :)
Michael
Promise a more "poetic" endeavor next time around. :)
Michael
31st Jul 2015 12:27pm
hehe i often forget to tuck my proverbial ballls, apologies if offence was given...
... i said my piece simply to say it, not from being privvy to pm's/mud slinging etc. i rarely use the system m'self because i can't be arsed getting involved with personal dramas
i don't pretend to understand the inner workings of any of the above nor is it any of my concern but i do understand wanting to have an all out tirade against an ex
just wanted to clear the air & all that jazz :)
xo
... i said my piece simply to say it, not from being privvy to pm's/mud slinging etc. i rarely use the system m'self because i can't be arsed getting involved with personal dramas
i don't pretend to understand the inner workings of any of the above nor is it any of my concern but i do understand wanting to have an all out tirade against an ex
just wanted to clear the air & all that jazz :)
xo
31st Jul 2015 12:28pm
hehe i often forget to tuck my proverbial ballls, apologies if offence was given...
... i said my piece simply to say it, not from being privvy to pm's/mud slinging etc. i rarely use the system m'self because i can't be arsed getting involved with personal dramas
i don't pretend to understand the inner workings of any of the above nor is it any of my concern but i do understand wanting to have an all out tirade against an ex
just wanted to clear the air & all that jazz :)
xo
... i said my piece simply to say it, not from being privvy to pm's/mud slinging etc. i rarely use the system m'self because i can't be arsed getting involved with personal dramas
i don't pretend to understand the inner workings of any of the above nor is it any of my concern but i do understand wanting to have an all out tirade against an ex
just wanted to clear the air & all that jazz :)
xo
31st Jul 2015 1:12pm
