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LET ME POUR
If you let me pour my love into you,
You may be amazed at what I can do
When my tool in your service is employed;
By no one else is it being enjoyed.
The bedroom's the workshop, the bed our bench
On which I will carve satisfaction, my wench.
If you're ready for action, on you I'll work;
Making you happy is what I don't shirk.
You may be amazed at what I can do
When my tool in your service is employed;
By no one else is it being enjoyed.
The bedroom's the workshop, the bed our bench
On which I will carve satisfaction, my wench.
If you're ready for action, on you I'll work;
Making you happy is what I don't shirk.
Published 3rd Jul 2015
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3rd Jul 2015 7:00am
I think my mind follows but could you explain the last line to me? I don't want to misinterpret.
3rd Jul 2015 10:20pm
It means he delights in making her happy, it is never a resented chore. ("Shirk" in our vernacular means "dodge" or play truant.)
10th Jul 2015 00:49am
3rd Jul 2015 8:39am
your poem is very clear to me Solomon...those few lines are exact and get the point across...
i think i need to pass this onto someone i know... ;)
i think i need to pass this onto someone i know... ;)
3rd Jul 2015 10:28pm
Yes, they do get the point across.
Something that, passed onto him by a woman, can give a man ideas and inspire confidence by appealing to his sense of ability to live up to it and get him in the mood.
This was another spontaneous overnight concoction.
Something that, passed onto him by a woman, can give a man ideas and inspire confidence by appealing to his sense of ability to live up to it and get him in the mood.
This was another spontaneous overnight concoction.
