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Imagine Us
sit here with thoughts of you
wondering if you can feel my mind
close your eyes and confess to me
tell me what you imagine my luv
whisper to me what you feel.....
as fingertips of passion touch your skin
with softness of a feather
from hardened nipples to throbbing tip
tell me what you imagine my luv
reveal what sweet pleasures bring.....
lay silently without a whisper
listen to the beauty of our thumping hearts
lay your hand upon mine to truly feel us
tell me what you imagine my luv
unfold secrets of your desires.....
tuck your every wish away within my heart
knowing I'm here to grant them all to you
allow me to penetrate your deepest thoughts
keep your eyes closed and imagine me laying beside you
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl
All Rights Reserved
wondering if you can feel my mind
close your eyes and confess to me
tell me what you imagine my luv
whisper to me what you feel.....
as fingertips of passion touch your skin
with softness of a feather
from hardened nipples to throbbing tip
tell me what you imagine my luv
reveal what sweet pleasures bring.....
lay silently without a whisper
listen to the beauty of our thumping hearts
lay your hand upon mine to truly feel us
tell me what you imagine my luv
unfold secrets of your desires.....
tuck your every wish away within my heart
knowing I'm here to grant them all to you
allow me to penetrate your deepest thoughts
keep your eyes closed and imagine me laying beside you
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl
All Rights Reserved
Published 23rd Jun 2015
| Edited 26th Jun 2015
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23rd Jun 2015 10:44pm
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24th Jun 2015 8:59pm
Awe Sweet S......there is no bigger compliment when words can't be found......I'm so blushing lavender.....LOL!!! Thank you.....xo :)
24th Jun 2015 2:11am
Passion rising as you fall deeper into thoughts of the hands that make your body tingle as it reaches in deep capturing the heart. Beautiful write
24th Jun 2015 9:05pm
Mmmmmm......thank you for such a.....a......um......tingling words and smile to my write......glad it captivated......xo :)
Anonymous
24th Jun 2015 6:09am
Ah, Miss Flower, always a pleasure to read one of your sensual erotic poems. Only you can paint such beauty. . .you're in a class amongst those beautiful Poetresses lingering here on DU. . .miss you. . .xoxo, Devlin.
24th Jun 2015 9:17pm
Awe Sweet Dev......among the ones who make me blush.....tipping my pen to you with respect as you being in the top realm of poetresses here yourself.....to leave such words are highly humbling......thank you my precious friend......miss you too.....pm me anytime.....luv and hugs xo :)
24th Jun 2015 7:09am
24th Jun 2015 9:26pm
Oh Glen you always make me smile.....will have donut and drink waiting for you at the bar.....xo :)
24th Jun 2015 11:43pm
I can relate to the bittersweet feeling, laying in bed and wondering if the one I desire is thinking of me and sensing my thoughts and feelings. Nicely expressed! JJ
26th Jun 2015 1:39am
Awe JJ.....you always understand what I write.....you're a very special soul.....one day a Lady will be very lucky to be yours.....thank you for your insight.....xo :)
25th Jun 2015 1:42am
26th Jun 2015 1:40am
Anonymous
26th Jun 2015 2:49am
you have such an intuitive sense of making the reader feel the moment,I could close my eyes and have quite the nice dreams!
26th Jun 2015 3:09am
Close your eyes.....let your mind drift in the darkness.....see all that you desire come to life......rest your soul as your luver lays beside you.....
Seems as if you have inspired my pen....thank you xo :)
Seems as if you have inspired my pen....thank you xo :)
28th Jun 2015 7:27pm
Imagination often becomes reality.
The intangible grows tangible.
Damn fine write, ES!
xo
ES
The intangible grows tangible.
Damn fine write, ES!
xo
ES
30th Jun 2015 4:51pm
Hey EV......if my imagination ever becomes reality......I'm in for a good future of luv.....maybe even a bit of corruption......mmmmm......honored by the RL add on.....thank you.....luv and hugs xo :)
30th Jun 2015 4:32am
To just give a 'Like' to this would be an injustice. This really spoke to me and my heart rate did quicken. Brilliant!
30th Jun 2015 4:52pm
Hey Me.....your words enlighten my heart today......thank you for sharing your thoughts......xo :)
5th Jul 2015 5:22am
*whew* this piece is hot enough to start a fire... no need to call 911... let it burn hehe... i enjoyed this sexy ink :D
5th Jul 2015 10:54pm
Thank you Magic for such enthusiasm......hope you cool down...um....slowly.....enjoy it completely......xo :)
Anonymous
4th Aug 2015 3:37am
If he tells you what you desire him to tell, there will be great whoopee tonight.
4th Aug 2015 5:55am
Thanks Scooter for the laugh tonight.....you've brought a smile to my page.....xo :)
