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HowDeep(is)yOurLove[Womb],EarthMother? Let'sCalculate...
....ACourseOfAction
shal'low in the shadow/shadows
in shallows /
what word? what care?
let
go letting
g o /
set free let free
ever y body free
to delude as free
as free belief
can possible be,
obcessin'free[ly]
over ever y
sound/word/jester's
gestures, bounded
& gagg'ed to really true real
freedoom de dumbdumb/
free to speak freespeech, so'long
as no body be wit
in
shshshshshouting distance
(bein an ear to hear the
harming sound off'end
& rot thee po'lil children's
m I n d [s].
lookslike as'if aye'll [n]ever be freefreefree
to stay locked in the curse of
ne'er being free[ly] prison'd
in yOur warm freelove moisthumid
e n c lo s u r e ,
freelyfreely
overdoing the thee over'acting
of free over're
action, or just let go,
( & j u s t
Go)
wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
2015dkzk:phonyFOTOriginaleBY:dkzk:"Deeeep(in)TheeWoooomb"
shal'low in the shadow/shadows
in shallows /
what word? what care?
let
go letting
g o /
set free let free
ever y body free
to delude as free
as free belief
can possible be,
obcessin'free[ly]
over ever y
sound/word/jester's
gestures, bounded
& gagg'ed to really true real
freedoom de dumbdumb/
free to speak freespeech, so'long
as no body be wit
in
shshshshshouting distance
(bein an ear to hear the
harming sound off'end
& rot thee po'lil children's
m I n d [s].
lookslike as'if aye'll [n]ever be freefreefree
to stay locked in the curse of
ne'er being free[ly] prison'd
in yOur warm freelove moisthumid
e n c lo s u r e ,
freelyfreely
overdoing the thee over'acting
of free over're
action, or just let go,
( & j u s t
Go)
wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
2015dkzk:phonyFOTOriginaleBY:dkzk:"Deeeep(in)TheeWoooomb"
Published 21st Jun 2015
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22nd Jun 2015 00:01am
don't matter if it's shallow
or it's deep, just so long as it
makes it to the surface -
well, that's my excuse...
or it's deep, just so long as it
makes it to the surface -
well, that's my excuse...
22nd Jun 2015 4:44am
22nd Jun 2015 4:11am
"/jester's
gestures, bounded
& gagg'ed to really true real
freedoom de dumbdumb/"
~you know u never fail to instigate my mind, rite? grins fer that.
" or just let go,
( & j u s t
Go) "
~sweet poem on its own..
*this kinda stuff makes me happy to read you..
enjoyed, m'hunz, en'totale ;)
~d
gestures, bounded
& gagg'ed to really true real
freedoom de dumbdumb/"
~you know u never fail to instigate my mind, rite? grins fer that.
" or just let go,
( & j u s t
Go) "
~sweet poem on its own..
*this kinda stuff makes me happy to read you..
enjoyed, m'hunz, en'totale ;)
~d
22nd Jun 2015 4:46am
22nd Jun 2015 4:29am
Freedom is an illusion, especially here in America. Good write, Danny. I am always amazed at your format and vocabulary.
22nd Jun 2015 4:58am
yes...'mer'ka is 'bout FreeDumb
pay-slaves hypnotized by big money, delusions of heroism, & a God created to justify the fine tuning & subtle'ization of atrocity to separate us from the Hitlers, Stalins, PolPots, Idi Amins, etc.
Everything we are taught to be fucking Proud of was based in deception, exploitation, & atrocity.
AND the intoxication of 'Bread & Circuses' Roman method of distractive diversion taken to levels no Roman emperor could ever have imagined in his wildest.
for fuck's sake, shut me up
G'odd bless ye dear
22nd Jun 2015 8:09am
It reads like a light wave trickling in a stream of consciousness that's comforting. Excellent me thinks.
22nd Jun 2015 2:14pm
22nd Jun 2015 2:16pm
