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lost the war

Cry
Yet you smile
Fall
Yet you stand tall
Feel like nothing
Yet your being told your everything
I'm sorry for your loss
Not of a person
Or a member of your family
Not a dog
Not a cat
Not a fish
You didnt lose
Physically but
You lost mentally
Mentally you are gone
Mentally you have died
You still laugh and cry
You still feel pain
But what is inside
Is nothing
No soul
All blood
All Bones
And all muscles
Keeping you together
To look normal
Or like the others
But there is a difference
You are walking around dead
They are not...
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