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5 broken hearts
5 broken hearts is what I was given.
True love is what I gave.
I walked through the dark sands that were stained red.
I painted the sky that was coated in black.
I walked in the fire with my soul on the wire.
I made bright water that shattered my cold soul.
For the true fool in this story was the girl that followed the devil.
With a broken sole, for I am nothing but the lost wanderer.
Traveling in hail and fire.
These icy caverns are made of lava.
And now you have finally broken my heart.
After you said " I hate you"
True love is what I gave.
I walked through the dark sands that were stained red.
I painted the sky that was coated in black.
I walked in the fire with my soul on the wire.
I made bright water that shattered my cold soul.
For the true fool in this story was the girl that followed the devil.
With a broken sole, for I am nothing but the lost wanderer.
Traveling in hail and fire.
These icy caverns are made of lava.
And now you have finally broken my heart.
After you said " I hate you"
Published 27th May 2015
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27th May 2015 11:08am
Wow. What powerful emotion. The last line brought tears to my eyes. How could anyone say that? This is truly a lovely write. Bravo!
27th May 2015 1:12pm
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