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"Enjoy The Silence As We Hug"
lay your soul upon mine
let us lay here just you and me
we are all that matters
in this very moment
feel the soft rain
shower us with kisses
sweet cloud tears
dripping upon our skin
hands slowly drift
across each other's curves
completely feeling your caress
as our lips tenderly meet
feel our hearts melting into one
no words needed between us
looking into your beautiful greens
I can feel your luv as if spoken
cuddle with me my luv
hold me endlessly
till blues skies streak orange
as the sun beautifies our paradise
Copyright © 2015 flowergirl
All rights Reserved.
let us lay here just you and me
we are all that matters
in this very moment
feel the soft rain
shower us with kisses
sweet cloud tears
dripping upon our skin
hands slowly drift
across each other's curves
completely feeling your caress
as our lips tenderly meet
feel our hearts melting into one
no words needed between us
looking into your beautiful greens
I can feel your luv as if spoken
cuddle with me my luv
hold me endlessly
till blues skies streak orange
as the sun beautifies our paradise
Copyright © 2015 flowergirl
All rights Reserved.
Published 20th May 2015
| Edited 1st Jun 2015
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20th May 2015 4:43am
You're a natural Flower! This time's the scenery's on the inside accompanied by a tender touch. Still beautiful as always...!
23rd May 2015 1:57am
Awe Crow......you always make me feel proud of what I write.....to keep on keepin on.....thank you my friend......sending luv and hugs your way....xo :)
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20th May 2015 5:00am
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Sweet S.....you're a other that makes me glad I still post here.....thank you for your smiles and helping me believe in myself....you're a sweet soul.....luv and smiles to your way.....xo :)
Anonymous
20th May 2015 6:09am
Miss Flower. . .I envision a lonely beach and the scent of orange blossoms swaying in the wind. . .*sigh*. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
23rd May 2015 2:04am
Ooooo Dev......thank you for adding to my peacefulness.....great vision you've brought to me.....you're precious my friend......luv ya xo :)
20th May 2015 7:13am
very nicely done flower and that picture tells the story great picture tom go with the poem
23rd May 2015 2:05am
Hi Glen.....thank you my sweet friend....glad you enjoyed.....thank you for the smile you always bring to my page.....xo :)
20th May 2015 11:08am
Tender is your heart. How flawless this is. Every hopeless romantic's dream.
Thank you for this impeccable poem flowergirl
Thank you for this impeccable poem flowergirl
23rd May 2015 2:08am
Awe Wanderer.......you just made my night and my heart smile.....thank you for leaving me such wonderful words.....hugs and smiles your way xo :)
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20th May 2015 11:46am
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23rd May 2015 2:12am
Lily my Nun sister......thank you so very much......you always make my soul happy and smile.....I'm glad I brought back a great memory for you.....luv ya much xo :)
20th May 2015 10:57pm
23rd May 2015 2:13am
Hi Hash.....you're so sweet.....I'm glad you do.....thank you for the luv and smiles you bring upon my page.....xo :)
23rd May 2015 9:48am
soulfully exotic
ur erotica is sublime
as much as mine does directly define
the two organs
without leaving it to imagination
though intertwined
ur erotica is sublime
as much as mine does directly define
the two organs
without leaving it to imagination
though intertwined
24th May 2015 3:24pm
Hey Again.....thanks for the poetic response.....much appreciate the read and comment xo :)
Anonymous
23rd May 2015 7:51pm
There is great power in a hug. A great pictures in your descriptions of one. Beautiful
24th May 2015 3:26pm
Hi SG......yes there is much power in a hug for sure.....happy you liked the pic.......always a pleasure to see you stop by my way......xo :)
12th Jun 2015 5:05pm
Ahhh, flowergirl, luv ~ :-*
This is exquisitely penned. What a stunning vista you present. This is so lovely, so tranquil, so soothing to the soul, luv. :-*
You make one yearn to be there... :-*
This is exquisitely penned. What a stunning vista you present. This is so lovely, so tranquil, so soothing to the soul, luv. :-*
You make one yearn to be there... :-*
16th Jun 2015 5:03am
Hey Savaja......I'm very honored that you've stopped my way......thrilled that you've enjoyed my adventure to a little paradise......thank you xo :)
16th Jun 2015 5:12am
Ahhh, flowergirl, luv ~ :-*
Thank YOU! I will be visiting again, luv, for your words are sweet, indeed. :-*
I am honored to visit you, luv. :-*
Thank YOU! I will be visiting again, luv, for your words are sweet, indeed. :-*
I am honored to visit you, luv. :-*
16th Jun 2015 5:17am
Awe......you have brought a much needed smile upon my soul.....thank you..xo :)
Anonymous
4th Aug 2015 3:59am
Yesss! When you can cuddle the world is yours.
4th Aug 2015 5:17am
For sure it is Scooter......hugs are a simple act of luv that is so very precious......luving your thoughts here.....xo :)
