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Short Nothings (�3)

1.Holding her hands
Eye's then closed
Fresh deep breath
World didn't matter

2.Glittering blindness alluring
Collapse strenght, giving in
Crystal clear cravings
Blurred love so strong

3. Shared hurricane sins
Denied this reality pains
Our chains unbreakable
� � � � � � for this love.

Written by Sadsmiles

Published 27th Apr 2015

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Re: Short Nothings (�3)

azrael (Rachelann)

28th Apr 2015 3:32am

I really enjoy how you structured this poem. In my opinion, the way it is written is just as powerful as the words. In this poems case both the words and the structure are full of strength and meaning. Thank you for sharing!