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Never Knowing
He was sleeping
when the spider runs in,
I tried to wake him
as the lock of hair was bleeding,
Right there, I left him
wondering why he wasn’t real
in his dreams,
swallowing the simultaneity,
He woke in a dungeon
with the Orb-weaver
and a rhodamine lock;
the child's hair was between his fingers.
when the spider runs in,
I tried to wake him
as the lock of hair was bleeding,
Right there, I left him
wondering why he wasn’t real
in his dreams,
swallowing the simultaneity,
He woke in a dungeon
with the Orb-weaver
and a rhodamine lock;
the child's hair was between his fingers.
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Re: Never Knowing
31st Mar 2015 4:31pm
so many threads
in our heads...
and yet you pluck out
the most interesting
strands..:)
a darkly shining
piece...
in our heads...
and yet you pluck out
the most interesting
strands..:)
a darkly shining
piece...
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Re: Never Knowing
31st Mar 2015 6:51pm
Winding paths lead through waking and sleeping. Often we don't know where we are ...
Like this poem!
Like this poem!
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re: Re: Never Knowing
31st Mar 2015 6:56pm
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1st Apr 2015 4:11am
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1st Apr 2015 1:57am
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1st Apr 2015 4:09am
Re: Never Knowing
1st Apr 2015 1:58am
Always give so much to think about ^^
Your poems say so much more then just the words :-)
Thanks for the share
Your poems say so much more then just the words :-)
Thanks for the share
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1st Apr 2015 4:09am
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Re: Never Knowing
Anonymous
3rd Apr 2015 3:27am
conundrum at its best, where reality and perception is intercepted and intersected.
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re: Re: Never Knowing
3rd Apr 2015 4:43am
Thank you so much for your awesome comment. I really appreciate it and glad its enjoyed. :)