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FUCK YOU!! (For Those Who PLAGIARIZE!!)
starting over
rise above the expected
reinventing myself
metamorphosis unknown
collected data
constant is the surveillance
beyond replication
the hypocrisy begins
false hope
chipping away armor
perpetual recovery
a routine experiment
wanna know
ask for fucking proof
images ingrained
wasted experience
sickening lies
honesty forever lost
demented world
sucking off talent
talentless hacks
robbing our lives away
stealing souls
fuck you, and die
FUCK YOU!!
AND DIE!!
"For My Wife, Who has had to deal with this SHIT!!"
rise above the expected
reinventing myself
metamorphosis unknown
collected data
constant is the surveillance
beyond replication
the hypocrisy begins
false hope
chipping away armor
perpetual recovery
a routine experiment
wanna know
ask for fucking proof
images ingrained
wasted experience
sickening lies
honesty forever lost
demented world
sucking off talent
talentless hacks
robbing our lives away
stealing souls
fuck you, and die
FUCK YOU!!
AND DIE!!
"For My Wife, Who has had to deal with this SHIT!!"
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Re: FUCK YOU!! (For Those Who PLAGIARIZE!!)
Anonymous
27th Mar 2015 5:16am
Dave, I'm so sorry she's going though this. I totally empathize with her, it's an indescribable feeling to see your own words under someone's name and they're gloating all over it, owning it without really understanding the backstory or the birth of those words.
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re: Re: FUCK YOU!! (For Those Who PLAGIARIZE!!)
27th Mar 2015 2:32pm
Thanks, Rina.. this was just me venting.. she didn't ask me to write it.. it just came out of me.. i appreciate your kind words..
Dave
Dave
Re: FUCK YOU!! (For Those Who PLAGIARIZE!!)
27th Mar 2015 6:39am
That sucks that your wife had to deal with that. It takes a lot of thought and love to write a great piece. For people to take that and say it's theirs, is crap. Great write as always Dave. Glad to see you writing :-)
Hope everything gets worked out with this.
Hope everything gets worked out with this.
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re: Re: FUCK YOU!! (For Those Who PLAGIARIZE!!)
27th Mar 2015 2:33pm
Thanks, DC.. i appreciate the kind words.. this was just a venting piece...
Dave
Dave
Re: FUCK YOU!! (For Those Who PLAGIARIZE!!)
27th Mar 2015 9:34am
This makes me so sick. Why are people like this? If we can't be honest with even the very center of who we are, such as a poem or a piece of art, a piece of a heart, stained with the essence of the creator...we are just empty. Plagiarists are just clowns in a lion tamers Halloween costume.
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re: Re: FUCK YOU!! (For Those Who PLAGIARIZE!!)
27th Mar 2015 2:35pm
Couldn't agree more, Sammy.. thanks for listening to this venting.. i truly appreciate your commentary..
Dave
Dave
Re: FUCK YOU!! (For Those Who PLAGIARIZE!!)
Anonymous
27th Mar 2015 7:57pm
Great write Dave. I can feel and hear these words being spoken as I read.
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re: Re: FUCK YOU!! (For Those Who PLAGIARIZE!!)
27th Mar 2015 11:18pm
Re: FUCK YOU!! (For Those Who PLAGIARIZE!!)
Anonymous
27th Mar 2015 8:00pm
Sorry this happened to you or someone you know
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re: Re: FUCK YOU!! (For Those Who PLAGIARIZE!!)
27th Mar 2015 11:18pm
Re: FUCK YOU!! (For Those Who PLAGIARIZE!!)
28th Mar 2015 3:04am
Dave, I hope those pieces or trash who plagiarize off your wife get what they deserve. Good job on the poem!
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re: Re: FUCK YOU!! (For Those Who PLAGIARIZE!!)
28th Mar 2015 3:01pm