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In the quiet of the dawn
Sleepless
Reading words of new poet's
Opening my world to new avenues of thought
I get so caught up in the me of me
You're a breath of new air
Fresh or otherwise
Grateful
Reading words of new poet's
Opening my world to new avenues of thought
I get so caught up in the me of me
You're a breath of new air
Fresh or otherwise
Grateful
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Re: In the quiet of the dawn
10th Mar 2015 9:49am
Re: In the quiet of the dawn
10th Mar 2015 10:02am
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Re: In the quiet of the dawn
10th Mar 2015 1:23pm
Love discovering new writers, as we discovered each other. I don't do it everyday but like to take the time to welcome people who are just starting out and need feedback to gain confidence to continue ....
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Re: In the quiet of the dawn
10th Mar 2015 2:43pm
I love this write! This site opens up so many alleys of new thought-and I agree with every word you write. Touché , Poe.
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re: Re: In the quiet of the dawn
10th Mar 2015 5:10pm
So many good writers here, just gotta take the time
Before dawn does it for me
Before dawn does it for me
Re: In the quiet of the dawn
10th Mar 2015 3:49pm
Love the simplicity, love the encouragement. Without feedback you feel like just another unnoticed soul in a sea of nameless faces. Comments grant us courage and a sense of community - thank you for the ones you've given me.
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re: Re: In the quiet of the dawn
10th Mar 2015 5:11pm
We were all rookies once.
I remember in the beginning how hard it was to get some street cred ...
Thx for your comment
I remember in the beginning how hard it was to get some street cred ...
Thx for your comment
Re: In the quiet of the dawn
Anonymous
10th Mar 2015 3:53pm
look at you being all daddy warbucks on the new guys! ;)
i'm totally kidding, cowboy. just giving you hell. sometimes i like to just go through the 'recent poems' tab and read and comment. sometimes you find treasure.
i'm totally kidding, cowboy. just giving you hell. sometimes i like to just go through the 'recent poems' tab and read and comment. sometimes you find treasure.
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re: Re: In the quiet of the dawn
10th Mar 2015 5:13pm
I feel the needle you're poking at me M
But, I can take it
Someone has to do the pro Bono work, this week it's me
But, I can take it
Someone has to do the pro Bono work, this week it's me
Re: In the quiet of the dawn
10th Mar 2015 4:26pm
heh i'll have trade surfing fetlife in the unholy hours of the morning to peek around dup
great write PS
great write PS
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Re: In the quiet of the dawn
10th Mar 2015 5:14pm
Or alt.com
Doing my little part for the rookie suppers
They can thank me later in the swamp of dreams ...
Doing my little part for the rookie suppers
They can thank me later in the swamp of dreams ...
Re: In the quiet of the dawn
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10th Mar 2015 9:07pm
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Re: In the quiet of the dawn
10th Mar 2015 9:15pm
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22nd Mar 2015 4:12am
Re. In the quiet of the dawn
17th Aug 2016 5:49pm
I love that you remind us that new very often equals fresh. I feel still very new here and I'm constantly running through the writing of those who've joined since me...and still trying to dig through many of those who came before. It's a daunting task but the rewards are amazing! Great write! :)
Willow
Willow
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Re. In the quiet of the dawn
17th Aug 2016 8:57pm
Thx Willow
You went back in time on this one ...
It looked new to me even though I wrote it !!
You went back in time on this one ...
It looked new to me even though I wrote it !!