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Hell with you
I could break you with a sentence
You stand on shaky, hollow ground
The truth can kill
A heart can mend
But you'll never have me again
Pearlescent dreams
And muted screams
These are a few of your favorite things
Demons are only found in our own hearts and minds
We make our own hell
You make mine
You stand on shaky, hollow ground
The truth can kill
A heart can mend
But you'll never have me again
Pearlescent dreams
And muted screams
These are a few of your favorite things
Demons are only found in our own hearts and minds
We make our own hell
You make mine
Published 6th Mar 2015
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6th Mar 2015 00:57am
6th Mar 2015 1:02am
6th Mar 2015 1:21am
great start, great finish, the 'favorite things' line is a little too cutesy, even tho it's meant to be sarcastic; I get that Julie Andrews image in my head.
it's effective, you get your serious emotion across...
it's effective, you get your serious emotion across...
6th Mar 2015 3:35am
6th Mar 2015 3:20am
The last two lines are POWERFUL on so many levels ... "You make mine" - this may be true - but why do we empower others in this way ... ?
29th May 2015 1:30am
