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Not a poem, but you probably won't even care.

"Fuck the world," people all over the world say when something goes wrong.
Something bad happens in someone's life because of somebody else
& the person's reaction would be hating the world.

The world is our home.
Our house is not our home.
This planet is, & we don't treat it like we should.
The flowers in the meadow are amazing & so bright.
We should once in a while go outside, & realize how perfect the world is all around.

People should go seek peace & prosperity in the world & in nature. Specially if our fellow earthlings treat us like we treat the world.

Written by naathalie___

(moongirl)

Published 5th Mar 2015

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Re: Not a poem, but you probably won't even care.

Anonymous

5th Mar 2015 8:44pm

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Re: Not a poem, but you probably won't even care.

Dimitri_Dragovich

5th Mar 2015 8:47pm

wow. powerful

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Re: Not a poem, but you probably won't even care.

Poetryman

6th Mar 2015 5:14am

How perceptive of you to realize that we all need to stop and smell the roses, else we forget how beautiful the air we breathe is and as a part of the nature around us, we should also recognize the beauty in each other. So often we abuse each other, we make messes of our own lives and live in denial, making an art-form of blaming everyone but our self for the misery in our heart. We need to weed the garden in our heart and dust the shelves in our brain as we purify our souls by dancing in the rain... there is poetry in your verse no matter what anyone thinks!
JJ

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joegracegrace (Joe Grace)

19th Mar 2015 11:30pm

"We should..realize how perfect the world is all around" - well said. Scientists tell us we may be the only planet with life in the whole universe. I think there are more. But as far as this galaxy, no. Earth is the ONLY one, I think. So if life, fauna and flora, are to spread to the other star systems(to their planets), who are the ones to get it done? Us Earthlings. Only WE can turn this lifeless galaxy into a LIVING galaxy, teeming with living globes. Earth, right now,is like one musician playing music by himself. But a galaxy of millions of planets with life on them - that would be like a whole orchestra. Playing a stirring symphony.

Mankind, over the next billion years, is destined to become a God figure. For if we bring life to distant planets, aren't we doing God's work? Aren't we becoming co-creators with the Creator, by finishing the job that he has (deliberately) left half-done?