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Battle Scars
Is there anything quite as satisfying
As the pain and discomfort
Of having been recently used
To meet sexy needs?
The chafing ache as you emerge from slumber
The muscular twinge in gravity’s grip
The irritation of sore parts rubbing on clothing
They coalesce in smiles reminiscent of fucking
Afflicted by the many angles
Of limbs intertwined
In their desperation
To find that final perfect fit
Spasms of soft and smooth
Chafing against firm and coarse
Abrasive enthusiasm exceeding
Boundaries of lubricated excitement
Post appeased slumber
In the wake of evening heat
Contentment in aching cock
Comfort in tender cunt
To swagger with survivors’ cheer of newly acquired battle scars
Published 27th Feb 2015
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27th Feb 2015 10:45pm
A very complex topic. With a confusing conflict. I guess there are worse ways to be used, but in some ways there is absolutely nothing worse. Another great write.
28th Feb 2015 9:02pm
In a loving relationship, the acquisition of these kinds of battle scars tend to be acceptable but I understand where you are coming from in context of being used.
At that point you are at risk of infection, from either obsession or moralistic compromise.
At that point you are at risk of infection, from either obsession or moralistic compromise.
27th Feb 2015 11:02pm
28th Feb 2015 9:02pm
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28th Feb 2015 9:04pm
Scars acquired in love are the best kind Schiitaryn - because you can smile at each other in shared pain the next day, and offer comforting touches and caresses, which always makes the pain more bearable.
28th Feb 2015 00:23am
Really clever and erotic topic, Frank. Sex as a loving, sensual battle and the soreness (or scars) felt as emblems of mutual victory and satisfaction. I'm sure you're looking forward to declaring war once more!
28th Feb 2015 9:06pm
This warrior is always ready for action Crowfly, ready to plant my standard at any point and face the encroaching tides!
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28th Feb 2015 00:23am
You have rendered me unable to think in 5-7-5!
The day after is nearly as good as the actual act. Nearly. At least if the act is done right. Very nice write, frank. Very nice.
The day after is nearly as good as the actual act. Nearly. At least if the act is done right. Very nice write, frank. Very nice.
28th Feb 2015 10:04pm
A sleight of hand or
should that be sleight of words
leaving ooh's and ahh's
Thank you Minerva, I agree the right kind of memory stimulants are always a good thing.
should that be sleight of words
leaving ooh's and ahh's
Thank you Minerva, I agree the right kind of memory stimulants are always a good thing.
What a vision Franko!
Post appeased slumber
In the wake of evening heat
Contentment in aching cock
Comfort in tender cunt
Absolutely lovely, submission can be quite rewarding indeed!
Write on!!
Always
Zazzles xoxox
Post appeased slumber
In the wake of evening heat
Contentment in aching cock
Comfort in tender cunt
Absolutely lovely, submission can be quite rewarding indeed!
Write on!!
Always
Zazzles xoxox
2nd Mar 2015 7:56pm
Post coital tenderness, whether derived from sub/dom or vanilla sex is always a happy thing!
Thanks for dropping in Zazzles.
Thanks for dropping in Zazzles.
3rd Mar 2015 4:07am
Wow, Franko. I just said this to John F. but you too are a master of words, especially of the erotic milieu. I love your poems. Thank you for sharing...
3rd Mar 2015 7:42pm
Thank you Toni, I greatly appreciate the praise, but with so much fantastic talent and clever writers on here, I feel a bit sheepish in claiming mastery of words.
but I have been learning to cope with compliments of late, and thus thank you very much for your words - it means a lot to me, and I really appreciate it.
but I have been learning to cope with compliments of late, and thus thank you very much for your words - it means a lot to me, and I really appreciate it.
