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Girl Next Door
Dropping off for Mister Mark
Finding his sister standing stark
This time she's not turning tricks
Just asking how I get my kicks
Next telling me that I'm in luck
Kneeling down, begins to suck
"Good Vibrations" to her hum
Swallowing deeply when I cum
Still letting no drop go to waste
Saying I'm a man of taste
I'm listening as this sweet young thing
Clears her throat, begins to sing:
"I've done everything I can
To establish proof that you're my man
So next time that I'm feeling blue
You can come to my rescue"
I just adore her vocal charms
Taking her within my arms
She's so much more than a whore
This reigning queen and girl next door.
Finding his sister standing stark
This time she's not turning tricks
Just asking how I get my kicks
Next telling me that I'm in luck
Kneeling down, begins to suck
"Good Vibrations" to her hum
Swallowing deeply when I cum
Still letting no drop go to waste
Saying I'm a man of taste
I'm listening as this sweet young thing
Clears her throat, begins to sing:
"I've done everything I can
To establish proof that you're my man
So next time that I'm feeling blue
You can come to my rescue"
I just adore her vocal charms
Taking her within my arms
She's so much more than a whore
This reigning queen and girl next door.
Published 8th Feb 2015
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OMG U are so talented, DAMN not sure what to say I mean this is so so clever!! I do love your mind set Crow!
I just adore her vocal charms
Taking her within my arms
She's so much more than a whore
This reigning queen and girl next door.
Always
Zazzles
I just adore her vocal charms
Taking her within my arms
She's so much more than a whore
This reigning queen and girl next door.
Always
Zazzles
8th Feb 2015 4:40pm
Thanks Zazzles. I'm glad you love my mind set even though I'm guilty of unclean thoughts.
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8th Feb 2015 6:53pm
Thank you, Deborah. And thanks for the collaboration yesterday. I learned to pay a little more careful attention, I hope.
8th Feb 2015 7:34pm
This was full of wit and just the right amout of sensual charm...well done crowfly!!
8th Feb 2015 8:24pm
8th Feb 2015 8:45pm
Wow Crow......this is hot......need to step out in the cold rain.....mmmmm......you're talent never ends.....xo :)
8th Feb 2015 9:31pm
Anonymous
8th Feb 2015 10:32pm
it's always the nice ones. the quiet ones.
watch out for that girl next door, crow. sometimes she's a little crazy.
good write, friend. very good.
watch out for that girl next door, crow. sometimes she's a little crazy.
good write, friend. very good.
9th Feb 2015 00:19am
9th Feb 2015 3:33am
From one extreme to the other. Anyone who can deliver a hummer with the grace and sensitivity of a theramin player is a goddess, not a whore. Awesome write crowfly!
9th Feb 2015 5:06am
9th Feb 2015 7:23pm
Wow...been missing for a few days, glad i checked up on all my updates. Really great write. Loved the flow and your description makes me even hear her voice. :)
9th Feb 2015 8:42pm
